for Fly Away5/19/2011 c1 
12Ainu
You know, somehow when I typed in "fly away" in the search box, this is easily the best poem I have come across, in all the others I have looked at. I can't quite put my finger on it, but it seems very unique, even for a poem, and very, very special - especially to those of us who can relate to it.
I'm so glad you shared this with us. Thank you.
12AinuYou know, somehow when I typed in "fly away" in the search box, this is easily the best poem I have come across, in all the others I have looked at. I can't quite put my finger on it, but it seems very unique, even for a poem, and very, very special - especially to those of us who can relate to it.
I'm so glad you shared this with us. Thank you.
3/20/2011 c1 this wild abyss
I liked the image you presented because it was consistent and worked for the subject you were going for. At times your phrasing was a bit awkward and could have been tightened, as it disrupted the flow of the piece, which I obviously did not like.
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I liked the image you presented because it was consistent and worked for the subject you were going for. At times your phrasing was a bit awkward and could have been tightened, as it disrupted the flow of the piece, which I obviously did not like.
From the Review Marathon (link in profile)