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7SophieInPink
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Oh, and if you get a chance feel free to check out my story Scandalous? I'd love to know what you think of it!
Keep up the great work!
Soph xx
7SophieInPinkCool! You have a very unique writing style and I like how you divided it into sections. This story is very gripping and it certainly draws the reader in. The ending is a bit depressing but you certainly did a good job of enticing the reader's emotions.
Oh, and if you get a chance feel free to check out my story Scandalous? I'd love to know what you think of it!
Keep up the great work!
Soph xx