for Anxiety3/26/2011 c1 
173Little girl Big world
i love the auotors note at the end, just knowing that helps to understand that this i sexactly what you were feeling and makes the feeling that much stronger. The language in this is very powerful. well done
173Little girl Big worldi love the auotors note at the end, just knowing that helps to understand that this i sexactly what you were feeling and makes the feeling that much stronger. The language in this is very powerful. well done
3/25/2011 c1 20The Wandering Musician
Wow, this is an interesting poem. I love your word choice in so many places. The metaphor is wonderful, but I'm a little confused: if the brainwaves are receding, why are people seeking higher ground? Other than that, wonderful job!
20The Wandering MusicianWow, this is an interesting poem. I love your word choice in so many places. The metaphor is wonderful, but I'm a little confused: if the brainwaves are receding, why are people seeking higher ground? Other than that, wonderful job!