for After Ever4/8/2011 c1 
5Storyteller's Shadow
Usually, I have something to say about everything I read. A word out of place, an akward line, or a problem with its overall flow. Not here. I have nothing to critique. Usually, I would reprimand about capitalising the first words of new lines. Not in "After Ever". It fits.
Beautiful poem with a very powerful meaning. "And he is afraid of grassnakes, and she gets catcalls from the drunkards"
5Storyteller's ShadowUsually, I have something to say about everything I read. A word out of place, an akward line, or a problem with its overall flow. Not here. I have nothing to critique. Usually, I would reprimand about capitalising the first words of new lines. Not in "After Ever". It fits.
Beautiful poem with a very powerful meaning. "And he is afraid of grassnakes, and she gets catcalls from the drunkards"