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5/19/2011 c1 15PrincessVeryTea
It is a very interesting theme to write about but I did find it difficult to read because it didn't flow easily. When speaking it aloud the cadence was off because some of the sentances were too long, which broke it up. When writing a poem I think of it like a song without the music, it still has a rythm and flow, and real it aloud to feel how it falls off the tongue :) but yes, it is a wonderful topic, you could really expand it and make it a real oddessy on Zeus' lovers...
3/30/2011 c1 18Loss of Words
Hm. I really liked the theme of the story; I haven't seen very many poems centered around greek mythology, and I especially liked the creative focus on the idea of Zeus's multiple lovers.

I did not like the spacing and proportions of the poem, though. The poem was only 4-5 words long, and left it feeling a bit disjointed and in need of better flow.

All together, well done. I really enjoyed the poem. :)
3/26/2011 c1 30YasuRan
This was quite amusing: I wasn't expecting an appearance from those mythical figures but it slid so seamlessly with the theme.

Lovely read. Please keep up the good work :)

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