for c56/25/2011 c1 
1k+Faithless Juliet
Again, you create the two intermingling worlds here, which I really like. Loved the idea of the whale boned carrier and the illusions to a journey.
Only real complaint is just that its a bit spread out - I think you could have contained the idea a bit more, not condenced but maybe tightened the edges of narration a bit.
Juliet.
1k+Faithless JulietAgain, you create the two intermingling worlds here, which I really like. Loved the idea of the whale boned carrier and the illusions to a journey.
Only real complaint is just that its a bit spread out - I think you could have contained the idea a bit more, not condenced but maybe tightened the edges of narration a bit.
Juliet.