for Alone10/10/2012 c1 
2Vamp712
maybe a bit to short, this is kind of a describtion, mabe ad onto this for chapter one? This definintly sounds like a story for me, let me know when you ad on more, the sentence "There is place in the world where there is in this universe where a battle takes place." doesn't flow very well mabe try "There is a place in the world, in this universe, where a battle takes place."
2Vamp712maybe a bit to short, this is kind of a describtion, mabe ad onto this for chapter one? This definintly sounds like a story for me, let me know when you ad on more, the sentence "There is place in the world where there is in this universe where a battle takes place." doesn't flow very well mabe try "There is a place in the world, in this universe, where a battle takes place."
9/23/2011 c1 2nexuswarrior
HEY!
Can you believe it! After sooooo long i finally signed in!
Anyho, thanks for the message - it reassured me you hadn't forgotten your lonely friend =D but it also made me see this!
Awesome start ^_^
ever need someone to rant about it too you know who you can talk too
really looking forward to the rest ^_^
Anyway, got to go.
talk you soon inshallah
~nexuswarrior~
2nexuswarriorHEY!
Can you believe it! After sooooo long i finally signed in!
Anyho, thanks for the message - it reassured me you hadn't forgotten your lonely friend =D but it also made me see this!
Awesome start ^_^
ever need someone to rant about it too you know who you can talk too
really looking forward to the rest ^_^
Anyway, got to go.
talk you soon inshallah
~nexuswarrior~
7/27/2011 c1 anisha
A very interesting start wheres the rest of it i IT!
A very interesting start wheres the rest of it i IT!
6/21/2011 c1 8Goodlife16
Sounds like the beginning of a great story! You should definitely write some more.
8Goodlife16Sounds like the beginning of a great story! You should definitely write some more.
6/4/2011 c1 31HeroofEnelios
Very interesting, this sounds like it would be a great story to read. You should continue.
Keep writing! :)
31HeroofEneliosVery interesting, this sounds like it would be a great story to read. You should continue.
Keep writing! :)
3/30/2011 c1 4katiegirl101199
This sounds really interesting! Are you going to make a story of it? Because you should. ;)
This is a wonderful start, great writing!
-Katie
4katiegirl101199This sounds really interesting! Are you going to make a story of it? Because you should. ;)
This is a wonderful start, great writing!
-Katie