for True Or Real4/11/2011 c3 
3SweetSarah2
Nice, I don't like Braiden.
He's mean.
BTW when does the other guy come in?
Just wondering...Anyways update soon!
XD
3SweetSarah2Nice, I don't like Braiden.
He's mean.
BTW when does the other guy come in?
Just wondering...Anyways update soon!
XD
4/10/2011 c3 7Pan's Grandaughter
I do not trust the Braiden dude at all. Bipolar and seems like not all too trust worthy. I have no bases for my suspicions though... I just don't trust him.
When does this new guy come in? You are 3 chapters in, but no new guy that is mentioned in your summary. Did he get shot?
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
7Pan's GrandaughterI do not trust the Braiden dude at all. Bipolar and seems like not all too trust worthy. I have no bases for my suspicions though... I just don't trust him.
When does this new guy come in? You are 3 chapters in, but no new guy that is mentioned in your summary. Did he get shot?
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
4/6/2011 c2 3SweetSarah2
Cool. You capture her character really well, but I was kind of confused at that last sentence or so; it felt rushed. Anyway, other than that I LOVED it! Definitely continue this.XD
3SweetSarah2Cool. You capture her character really well, but I was kind of confused at that last sentence or so; it felt rushed. Anyway, other than that I LOVED it! Definitely continue this.XD
3/29/2011 c2 eminemluvr
Wow I was expecting a kiss between them not Heather running away haha I love how you're writing this can't wait for the next chapter (:
Wow I was expecting a kiss between them not Heather running away haha I love how you're writing this can't wait for the next chapter (:
3/28/2011 c1 1Spring Jasmine Flower
Wow! awesome first chapter! A spy story huh? dats awesome!Update soon! can't wait to see what will happen next!
1Spring Jasmine FlowerWow! awesome first chapter! A spy story huh? dats awesome!Update soon! can't wait to see what will happen next!