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4/11/2011 c3 3SweetSarah2
Nice, I don't like Braiden.

He's mean.

BTW when does the other guy come in?

Just wondering...Anyways update soon!

4/10/2011 c3 7Pan's Grandaughter
I do not trust the Braiden dude at all. Bipolar and seems like not all too trust worthy. I have no bases for my suspicions though... I just don't trust him.

When does this new guy come in? You are 3 chapters in, but no new guy that is mentioned in your summary. Did he get shot?

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
4/6/2011 c2 3SweetSarah2
Cool. You capture her character really well, but I was kind of confused at that last sentence or so; it felt rushed. Anyway, other than that I LOVED it! Definitely continue this.XD
3/29/2011 c2 eminemluvr
Wow I was expecting a kiss between them not Heather running away haha I love how you're writing this can't wait for the next chapter (:
3/29/2011 c2 MITCHIESHANELUVR124
nice! keep going!
3/28/2011 c1 2Soonafter100
Its diffrent and I can;t wait for more!
3/28/2011 c1 1Spring Jasmine Flower
Wow! awesome first chapter! A spy story huh? dats awesome!Update soon! can't wait to see what will happen next!
3/27/2011 c1 MITCHIESHANELUVR124
nice! keep going!
3/27/2011 c1 eminemluvr
This looks like it's gonna be a great story! Can't wait to read more! (:
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