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12/17/2012 c5 9Binkybaby
Update soon
4/2/2011 c5 6MilanJohns
Nice chapter, and about caleb- I still don't have an opinion about him maybe because there are not a lot of scenes with him and in the one's I read there is still only one side of him.

So I would wanna see more 'Carvy' scenes too..^^
4/1/2011 c4 5Disney Is Hardcore
Oh no! Poor girl! D:
4/1/2011 c2 Disney Is Hardcore
Oh, how sweet...she doesn't get earth at all ^-^
4/1/2011 c4 6MilanJohns
It just keeps getting better and better! ^^
3/31/2011 c3 MilanJohns
YA...Awesome chapter!

Hope to see more soon...
3/30/2011 c2 MilanJohns
I really liked it, can't wait for the next chapter

3/30/2011 c2 Vampireacademyrox
not bad plz ud soon :D
3/29/2011 c1 MilanJohns
The plot is really interesting, good job! :)
3/27/2011 c1 Erin Bear
I really like the idea of this story and the potential plot line. I haven't seen too many stories on this site about angels, so the plot hasn't been completely overdone yet.

Is Arvy her real name or a nickname? It's definitely a name that haven't seen anywhere before.

You have a very nice, easy-to-read writing style, and I didn't spot any typos or huge grammatical errors, so no complaints there.

Since this is the first chapter, I don't have anything very helpful to say yet, other than to really try to keep this story from becoming very predictable. Between your summary and the last line of this chapter, I think most readers, including myself, have already figured out what's going to happen in general.

I'm looking forward to reading the characterizations of Arvy and Caleb and their interactions. Good luck!
3/27/2011 c1 33FLIPPER66
3/27/2011 c1 Hale-Stormer
Sounds promosing! Can't wait to see where this leads. I love the part where her mom was like "You such an angel." It was perfect lol. Keep up the awesome writing. :)


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