for Small Miracles5/25/2011 c1 slipaway
I story alerted this a while back, when I'd first joined, and didn't get around to reviewing. But I'm back, so here we go.
I liked your description of Vincent and the man who, for lack of better words, is stalking him. Very strong pull into the chapter for me. And although the end was slightly shaky for me, it seemed to jump somewhat randomly, I'm still curious as to the man's intentions. Sorry if this is a little vague, it has been quite a bit of time since I read your chapter. XD But really.
I'm interested to see where you take this.
I story alerted this a while back, when I'd first joined, and didn't get around to reviewing. But I'm back, so here we go.
I liked your description of Vincent and the man who, for lack of better words, is stalking him. Very strong pull into the chapter for me. And although the end was slightly shaky for me, it seemed to jump somewhat randomly, I'm still curious as to the man's intentions. Sorry if this is a little vague, it has been quite a bit of time since I read your chapter. XD But really.
I'm interested to see where you take this.