for Marshmallow Revolver6/27/2011 c1 
237classic violet
Interesting. I like the combination of tragedy with softness. The title itself is unique. Great job.
237classic violetInteresting. I like the combination of tragedy with softness. The title itself is unique. Great job.
3/30/2011 c1 1StoryMonster
Pretty interesting (and amusing) way of putting it. xD
I liked the concept, as I mentioned, and the only drawback I noticed was the all-small-letters thing.
If you had written it using correct punctuation and stuff, it'd have been perfect.
Nice one!
~StoryMonster
PS. Could you please return this via Your's Truly, an Indian Pessimist?
Thanks!
1StoryMonsterPretty interesting (and amusing) way of putting it. xD
I liked the concept, as I mentioned, and the only drawback I noticed was the all-small-letters thing.
If you had written it using correct punctuation and stuff, it'd have been perfect.
Nice one!
~StoryMonster
PS. Could you please return this via Your's Truly, an Indian Pessimist?
Thanks!