for fantasy7/30/2018 c1 Guest
Not bad, pretty good
Not bad, pretty good
3/28/2011 c1 
119SomeRandomScribbles
Great poem! You use language really well and create a clear image in the reader's head. The rhyming couplets and rhythm work well too, as they give the poem a fairytale feel. There are a couple of errors I've noticed - I think the plural of Cyclops is Cyclopses, and there shouldn't be a comma after trees - but otherwise, this is very good indeed :)
119SomeRandomScribblesGreat poem! You use language really well and create a clear image in the reader's head. The rhyming couplets and rhythm work well too, as they give the poem a fairytale feel. There are a couple of errors I've noticed - I think the plural of Cyclops is Cyclopses, and there shouldn't be a comma after trees - but otherwise, this is very good indeed :)