
4/14/2011 c1
28GummiBear146
It's so sad, almost like the narrarater is resigned to his or her fate. They feel as if there is nothing they can do to change that. I'm liking it. It touches me on a very deep level, and I think it was written very well. Good Job.

It's so sad, almost like the narrarater is resigned to his or her fate. They feel as if there is nothing they can do to change that. I'm liking it. It touches me on a very deep level, and I think it was written very well. Good Job.