4/8/2011 c1 1SoKowaii
Oh wow, It sounded interesting from the small summary, but holy fuck. I like this... a lot.

I actually REALLY liked it, and I felt that it wasn't cheesy or anything, but super original. I liked it a lot, and I'm not sure you'd have to do any revision, (though you can do whatever you'd like to your story) :D Really though, I'm impressed.

I really enjoy Nekane's character (love the name especially) She seems like a very strong and courageous mischievous girl, almost kind of "punk-ish?" Anyway, I love it.

Also, what a pretty girl-er... BOY! lol. Woah, Asier had a funny low laugh, but then to find out that she... is a he? Totally unexpected, and it sounds like he's done this before "I tricked you? Didn't beat my last record, but yay!" Wow. That's completely alluring in terms of "What's up with that, i can't wait to see what happens next!" XD Really though, I'm super intrigued.

Also, I like the "dancing tattoo's" Idea. Now that's freaking original.

This is a fun read, and I'm glad it's fun writing this! I will definitely be R&R...ing? when more chapters are posted! Anyway, I'm glad I had a chance to read this!