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10/11/2012 c3 95XxXKristie MarieXxX
This is so cute! Made me laugh/smile. Great job :)
10/11/2012 c2 XxXKristie MarieXxX
So intense! He sounds so much better off without her anyway :) Its not very long but I feel like I no the Characters, Great job!
10/11/2012 c1 XxXKristie MarieXxX
Love it :)
4/29/2011 c1 81Princess-anna57
Simple but good! I would like to see you write an entire story, I would happily read. :) You know I'm a big fan of yours!

~Anna~ ^_^
4/16/2011 c3 298Moon-Chaser
I don't think that you did anything wrong, it seems perfectly fine and readable to me. I like the playful slant that you have put on this chapter, made me smile.

Keep it up.
4/16/2011 c2 Moon-Chaser
I feel like I have read these before. Perhaps this is a repost? Either way, I think that it is okay for you to be slipping between point of views because it is clearly defined within the text.

Keep it up.
4/16/2011 c1 Moon-Chaser
You really do like those words, don't you.

Keep it up.

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