
4/3/2011 c1
1k+Faithless Juliet
Wow! This one really blew me away, phenomenal character study.
You have a lot of intricate things here that set up not just the subject but the narrator as well.
For the narrator I felt like they were more the central focus of this rather than the Frenchman, because she was seeing him through her eyes so the perspective might always be off. I think the moral ideology of the two are quite different. On the one had she speaks about yellow and lighting candles for the missing and wounded and I could almost see the Frenchman rolling his eyes at the bourgeois of the whole thing. For this man I feel like he views himself apart from everyone else, aware of the powers he possesses but absent of their effects. I feel like theres a bit of an opposites attract kind of thing going on, each wanting to know more about the other and their world.
Juliet.

Wow! This one really blew me away, phenomenal character study.
You have a lot of intricate things here that set up not just the subject but the narrator as well.
For the narrator I felt like they were more the central focus of this rather than the Frenchman, because she was seeing him through her eyes so the perspective might always be off. I think the moral ideology of the two are quite different. On the one had she speaks about yellow and lighting candles for the missing and wounded and I could almost see the Frenchman rolling his eyes at the bourgeois of the whole thing. For this man I feel like he views himself apart from everyone else, aware of the powers he possesses but absent of their effects. I feel like theres a bit of an opposites attract kind of thing going on, each wanting to know more about the other and their world.
Juliet.