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5/1/2011 c1 18Luna Carn
Perfect format, and very entertaining to read . . . at least until the last part. That hurt.
4/9/2011 c1 21Sercus Kaynine
I like the formatting and the modern feel to this piece. The way you inserted Jo's voice into the story was entertaining, and my the end I thought I knew her better than most of the other characters.

Such a sad twist, though! Still, I liked how it tied in with the whole turn-your-phone-off thing. Very clever.

Good job and good luck in WCC!
4/7/2011 c1 75thewhimsicalbard
This one definitely wins the "Punch in the Gut" award for the month. The characters were believable, and the development was fantastic. I wasn't expecting that ending at all. This story was sad, haunting, and moving.

I especially loved the narrator's voice. She was interesting. I'd almost like to read about her outside of this disaster segment. This is a perfect story about loss, about the genesis of regret that tears a person apart. Once again, this was very powerful.

Best of luck in the WCC this month!


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