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4/4/2011 c1 73Jezsh
Imaginative, poignant work. If I had one suggestion, it might be to put the first letter of each line in lower case, except when you begin a new sentence. It might flow a little better that way. I hope you keep writing!

If you've time, check out my poetry blog too:

onemorelittleline.

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