for The Business Arrangement8/11/2011 c5 ebbster
still noticing the problem with exchanging Ben for Michael and vice-versa. I want to see the road trip...
still noticing the problem with exchanging Ben for Michael and vice-versa. I want to see the road trip...
8/4/2011 c4 ebbster
I like the direction this is going, but I noticed a few mistakes-you kept saying "michael said" or something similar when you should have said "Ben said." I kept having to re-read it to make sure I was getting the right person saying the right thing ^_^
Looking forward to more.
I like the direction this is going, but I noticed a few mistakes-you kept saying "michael said" or something similar when you should have said "Ben said." I kept having to re-read it to make sure I was getting the right person saying the right thing ^_^
Looking forward to more.
6/30/2011 c2 Fairy225
um, wasn't the main characters name Daniel in the first chapter? why'd it change to Ben? just wondering... (otherwise awesome story!)
um, wasn't the main characters name Daniel in the first chapter? why'd it change to Ben? just wondering... (otherwise awesome story!)
6/2/2011 c1 Wanabet
Sounds like it oculd turn into a really good story, but it would be easier on the eyes if it weren't bolded. Update soon.
Sounds like it oculd turn into a really good story, but it would be easier on the eyes if it weren't bolded. Update soon.
5/17/2011 c1 12eafggdsg
Great story so far! Excellent start! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and finding out Michael's position on the whole arranged marriage thing. I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon! :)
Great story so far! Excellent start! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and finding out Michael's position on the whole arranged marriage thing. I can't wait for the next chapter so please update soon! :)
5/16/2011 c1 
23plumblossom
I'm really looking forward to finding out what the real conflict here is going to be - so far the parents are well-meaning and their choice is not terrible. And apparently his university career is still okay with them?
But I feel like you have more planned for us, and I'm fascinated to learn what.
23plumblossomI'm really looking forward to finding out what the real conflict here is going to be - so far the parents are well-meaning and their choice is not terrible. And apparently his university career is still okay with them?
But I feel like you have more planned for us, and I'm fascinated to learn what.
4/5/2011 c1 Fairy225
Wow, this is really interesting! I'd love to see more of this if you decided to continue :D *Fave*
Wow, this is really interesting! I'd love to see more of this if you decided to continue :D *Fave*