for Mist6/17/2011 c1 
12macabre thoughts
I can identify with this. It really speaks to me of the common theme of women relying on others, often boyfriends, for their self-esteem. The imagery is glorious, and realistic in turns; the final few lines are humourous and pertinent - I am glad to have read this. Thank you for writing it, and don't ever stop. The world needs crystallized thoughts like these.
12macabre thoughtsI can identify with this. It really speaks to me of the common theme of women relying on others, often boyfriends, for their self-esteem. The imagery is glorious, and realistic in turns; the final few lines are humourous and pertinent - I am glad to have read this. Thank you for writing it, and don't ever stop. The world needs crystallized thoughts like these.
4/24/2011 c1 6BrighterThanTheSun
Wow, just wow, I do love your peom, it is very good, great vocabulary, wonderful.
6BrighterThanTheSunWow, just wow, I do love your peom, it is very good, great vocabulary, wonderful.
4/9/2011 c1 21kunoichi-socks
I loved how you ended this. I feel as if this is something that crossed your mind while at work and that this is more non-fiction than anything. That being said...The girl in the poem comes off as very closed minded, judging others because they are in relationships and she isn't, like it makes her better than them. She came off as very snide and high on herself.
However, the last stanza redeemed the poem for me, I really liked it. I think the girl in the poem needs to change her perspective of other people, but she is a talented writer.
Write on.
- Kat
21kunoichi-socksI loved how you ended this. I feel as if this is something that crossed your mind while at work and that this is more non-fiction than anything. That being said...The girl in the poem comes off as very closed minded, judging others because they are in relationships and she isn't, like it makes her better than them. She came off as very snide and high on herself.
However, the last stanza redeemed the poem for me, I really liked it. I think the girl in the poem needs to change her perspective of other people, but she is a talented writer.
Write on.
- Kat