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5/17/2011 c5 1leavesfallingup
This is only a guess on my part, but I suspect that Brandon is in love with Allison, but he knows her well enough to know that it won't go well if he confesses it to her; am I right? Somehow it seems that she is the one who broke it off the first time and that since then he is willing to let her set the tone just as long as he can keep her close.

There will probably a lot of hurt and anguish before she finally wakes up to the truth.

This is a well-written and thought-provoking story. I look forward to further installments.
5/16/2011 c5 2Soonafter100
Perfect chapter, I Loved it and i am excited for the next chapter!
5/2/2011 c4 4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick
Love the story please make allison and brandon get married in the end! Im not sure about Alicia cuz it sounds so like Allison but if its supposed to be like that then whatever its ur story. keep writting and DONT GET WRITERS BLOCK! :)
5/1/2011 c4 sacrificed heart
I totally didn't realise there was two updates! Ah, but I'm glad you updated, and I'm totally glad its a girl! And Allison's mom lives in a trailer? Where did they have Christmas at? I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope it's soon!
5/1/2011 c4 mysorryeyescansee
I am a new reader and I Love it!

Update soon!
5/1/2011 c4 2Soonafter100
please post as soon as possible! Love this and thought it was a great chapter!
4/21/2011 c3 4MercedesPhoenix
I just wanted to take this moment to say your story is really good so far! Some people think it's cliched, but I personally think you buried the cliche and left it in the dust. Of course, it's assumed there's a cliche somewhere deep inside there that could rear its head if you aren't careful with your story, but so far I really like this. This is the first story I've read that two best friends are friends with benefits and the girl gets knocked up. I hope she doesn't get kicked out of the house. A big family is what she needs and what most stories like this lack.

Also if you have the time, can you check out some of my stories? They don't have very many reviews, so I would really be grateful if you reviewed Bound and (maybe) After the Storm.

Basically, I think your story is great. So keep up the good work and update soon!
4/19/2011 c3 2Soonafter100
Please post soon, i want to hear more! Please Post!
4/19/2011 c3 6musicalfishieXD
Hahahaha I loved this chapter. I hope she does say yes. What happens next? Update soon
4/19/2011 c3 Lucii
I really like this...i think it is original whilst sticking to a average and popular storyline, you have made it really unique yet not straying too far... if you get what I mean. Anyway, I love please keep up the good writing :)
4/17/2011 c2 4AboutAs SubtleAs A FlyingBrick
aw! please write more. bit cliche but ah well! I still love it and can't wait for the next chapter! :D
4/15/2011 c2 6musicalfishieXD
I like it. Its a good idea. I want to know what happens between them later.

Even though you just updated, try and do it again soon!
4/15/2011 c1 helplessromantic285
I liked to where the story is going ,hopefully you update soon to get into more detail. I really wish they end up falling in love.
4/15/2011 c2 ReaDinG-XoX
oh you have to keep writing. love the story, you even made me cry a bit. cant wait ti read more of Allison and Brandons travel through life.
4/15/2011 c2 sacrificed heart
oh gosh so does my niece! she turns one today! :) hahah crazy world. i can't wait for the next chapter!
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