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1/31/2012 c1 1AdxMeliora
An accurate description of heartache. :)

You should try your hand at non-rhyming poetry! I see little hints of it already.
1/18/2012 c1 1maddie wilson
hey great story i like it :)
1/5/2012 c1 5thefaultinourpatronus
'Well ill just sit in my room sometimes...'

-Capitalization and punctuation missing in the "I'll"

I can't say I empathize with this, really, because I've never been in this situation. But judging by your other readers, they certainly can. The emotion towards the end was really nicely portrayed, great job!

Btw, thanks for your review on my story! This was the returned review (:

x mandy
12/26/2011 c1 Sotrue
This is so true... Really good poem(:
12/19/2011 c1 1Insert a Catchy Penname Here
:O OMG! This is, like, almost JUST like I felt about a boy who's now my boyfriend. :) Perfect job, just beautiful!
12/11/2011 c1 ochoujcoiwjseolcdjsncnsdm
So sad! I love this!
12/11/2011 c1 2EllezorPayne
This is so great! I hope you continue writing this. I kept smiling as I read all of it.
7/11/2011 c1 1frenchbeauty
But every time I seem to fine,

You are the one I can confide,

first line, what is it meant to be, find?

or seem to be fine?

anyways keep up the good work and keep writing
7/7/2011 c1 6ClaireJAngel
Contiue!Continue!Continue!
7/5/2011 c1 17Ann Lepson
I like this. :) lol

I really do! It reminds me of a Taylor Swift song in that: it's poetically direct, doesn't get clogged up in unneccessary descriptions or phrases, and it repeats over and over and over in your head. :)
6/29/2011 c1 6Taylor Wrote
This poem is really cute. It made me smile the whole time.

:)
6/27/2011 c1 6SiriMelk
This poem was so good, my eyes started to sting a bit...(or maybe that's just me spending long hours on the computer all day today) anyway, I thought this to be really sweet. Good job! :D
6/27/2011 c1 Palm Of Your Hand
Aw, this is good
6/27/2011 c1 7Read.Act.Sing.Swim
I think this poem was very true. The same thing happened to meā€¦and it HURTS. Loved it!

KEEP WRITING!
6/27/2011 c1 1Rose Melissa Ivashkov
Wow. This is absolutely amazing and beautiful. So true! I love it!
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