for Sharksucker5/31/2011 c4 ThebesPhalange
It took Luca some time to catch on! Well that certainly changes their relationship completely now that he's found that out. Their relationship is back on square one again which makes it more interesting as he's probably still going to be conflicted with his feelings. Ahh, you must update soon!
It took Luca some time to catch on! Well that certainly changes their relationship completely now that he's found that out. Their relationship is back on square one again which makes it more interesting as he's probably still going to be conflicted with his feelings. Ahh, you must update soon!
5/31/2011 c3 ThebesPhalange
I'm just catching up on your latest chapters since I've been away for a while, but I loved the development between Sofia and Luca. There's just such witty banter between them which is so endearing. Now I'm off to read chapter 4 :)
I'm just catching up on your latest chapters since I've been away for a while, but I loved the development between Sofia and Luca. There's just such witty banter between them which is so endearing. Now I'm off to read chapter 4 :)
5/3/2011 c3 Onett2
I dont mind the length but i would like to see the girls pow too. Apart from that, its nicely written.
I dont mind the length but i would like to see the girls pow too. Apart from that, its nicely written.
5/3/2011 c2 Onett2
Not bad. Still a bit confused about this story, but i liked it
Not bad. Still a bit confused about this story, but i liked it
4/26/2011 c2 ThebesPhalange
Hello again! I thought this was a great chapter and as I had hoped, there seems to be great chemistry between Luca and Sofia. I shall anticipate your next update :)
Hello again! I thought this was a great chapter and as I had hoped, there seems to be great chemistry between Luca and Sofia. I shall anticipate your next update :)
4/26/2011 c2 Ing
Nice story. Hope you post the next chapter soon.
Nice story. Hope you post the next chapter soon.
4/25/2011 c2 PJ Draft
Thanks so much for the update! I don't really have any comments aside from the dreaded 'update soon'. :D I will say that this is well-written and although there are little mistakes here and there it's really not at all as bad as you think. Betas are always nice though! Overall, I will be waiting for an update.
Thanks so much for the update! I don't really have any comments aside from the dreaded 'update soon'. :D I will say that this is well-written and although there are little mistakes here and there it's really not at all as bad as you think. Betas are always nice though! Overall, I will be waiting for an update.
4/25/2011 c2 
4Faithfully Connected
I REALLY like this story! I love the way you write it's like ...well I don't know how to describe it but I like your style. Can't wait for the next update
4Faithfully ConnectedI REALLY like this story! I love the way you write it's like ...well I don't know how to describe it but I like your style. Can't wait for the next update
4/17/2011 c1 Lola
Hey, I just wanted to point out that in your summary, I think you meant to write douche, not dooch. I'm pretty sure dooch isn't a word...
Hey, I just wanted to point out that in your summary, I think you meant to write douche, not dooch. I'm pretty sure dooch isn't a word...
4/17/2011 c1 PJ Draft
I checked this out because you were kind enough to read one of my stories. I will say I'm glad I did. Matteo and Luca's exchange was hilarious. I can't wait to learn more about Sophia. Awesome first chapter overall. I didn't notice any errors in grammar, or any awkward stuff that often creeps into rushed work. I can see you took a lot of time working on this. It's great so far, so update the next chapter soon please. Looking forward to reading more.
I checked this out because you were kind enough to read one of my stories. I will say I'm glad I did. Matteo and Luca's exchange was hilarious. I can't wait to learn more about Sophia. Awesome first chapter overall. I didn't notice any errors in grammar, or any awkward stuff that often creeps into rushed work. I can see you took a lot of time working on this. It's great so far, so update the next chapter soon please. Looking forward to reading more.
4/17/2011 c1 ThebesPhalange
It's only the first chapter and I'm already hooked!
Even though we've just had a brief glimpse of her, I'm liking the character of Sofia so far - she seems spunky.
I hope you'll be updating it soon!
Amy
It's only the first chapter and I'm already hooked!
Even though we've just had a brief glimpse of her, I'm liking the character of Sofia so far - she seems spunky.
I hope you'll be updating it soon!
Amy