
5/28/2011 c14
5lukas10
ohhh i loove it! i mean she went to her college and he to his, and still they stayed together! i love when she shows the girl a picture of will...! and when she comes to pick him up and everyone is like WHAAAAAT! and i love her dad :P acceptable :P
LOVE IT!

ohhh i loove it! i mean she went to her college and he to his, and still they stayed together! i love when she shows the girl a picture of will...! and when she comes to pick him up and everyone is like WHAAAAAT! and i love her dad :P acceptable :P
LOVE IT!
5/28/2011 c14
1noriepie
That was so cute with the right amount of fluff. Not a lot of people know this, but guys like Will is totally my type. Kind of like Chuck in the spy tv show. But Will sound much better.

That was so cute with the right amount of fluff. Not a lot of people know this, but guys like Will is totally my type. Kind of like Chuck in the spy tv show. But Will sound much better.
5/28/2011 c14
5marzmez
Nice Epilogue! It was more believable that they went to separate schools and the whole parents thing was funny. I'll try to get to your page to vote for that next story, but I have to take care of a virus on my computer that just popped up this morning.

Nice Epilogue! It was more believable that they went to separate schools and the whole parents thing was funny. I'll try to get to your page to vote for that next story, but I have to take care of a virus on my computer that just popped up this morning.
5/23/2011 c13 MarggiS
oooooh ... It all makes sense now! THank you! :)
oooooh ... It all makes sense now! THank you! :)
5/20/2011 c12 MarggiS
Wait, Im confused! If Parker's name is Harrington, and Will's is Thurston, why is Will the only one who's really a Harrington? Please explain Will's family a little more before you finish! And PLEASE write an epilogue, it'd be fun. and I love this story!
Wait, Im confused! If Parker's name is Harrington, and Will's is Thurston, why is Will the only one who's really a Harrington? Please explain Will's family a little more before you finish! And PLEASE write an epilogue, it'd be fun. and I love this story!
5/18/2011 c12 NeverHopeDesire
Aww! That's so sweet! Some great writing there, darlin'.
Aww! That's so sweet! Some great writing there, darlin'.
5/18/2011 c12 loganator13
loved it! nice ending- although Parker went down easier than i though. great though! please do an epilogue!
loved it! nice ending- although Parker went down easier than i though. great though! please do an epilogue!
5/18/2011 c1
5marzmez
I liked this story. It kinda reminded me of Grease 2. I loved the Will character. Totally honorable and unpretentious. I'll be checking out any other stories you have written.
All I've got to say about an Epilogue is this: If you are unhappy with the ending then YES you should write the epilogue. You should be happy with your work.

I liked this story. It kinda reminded me of Grease 2. I loved the Will character. Totally honorable and unpretentious. I'll be checking out any other stories you have written.
All I've got to say about an Epilogue is this: If you are unhappy with the ending then YES you should write the epilogue. You should be happy with your work.
5/17/2011 c12
1leavesfallingup
A nice story, but several of your chapters appear to be broken. I was unable to read three chapters, so the thread of the story was somewhat choppy. Hopefully this will be repaired because it would be nice to read it through from beginning to end.

A nice story, but several of your chapters appear to be broken. I was unable to read three chapters, so the thread of the story was somewhat choppy. Hopefully this will be repaired because it would be nice to read it through from beginning to end.
5/17/2011 c12
5lukas10
ohhh that so sweet! and cute! and damn everything! i wanted to kick parker's ass too! an dfi bet the whole schoool will if he ever get's to touch will now :¨P
so amazing :P
loved it!-
-M

ohhh that so sweet! and cute! and damn everything! i wanted to kick parker's ass too! an dfi bet the whole schoool will if he ever get's to touch will now :¨P
so amazing :P
loved it!-
-M
5/17/2011 c11 loganator13
wooo! go will! awrh, i hope he gets her in the end :( and argh parker is so annoying! i cant wait for the next chapter!
wooo! go will! awrh, i hope he gets her in the end :( and argh parker is so annoying! i cant wait for the next chapter!