for The Vanity Affair10/2/2019 c15 Unknown
Lamest, dumbest and most clichèd story yet I read.
Terrible grammar and punctuation errors aside, weakest plot going every which way but correct direction, objectifying and sexualising the main heroine, nothing but extremely one dimensional characters...you wrote the perfect soap opera yet.
Lamest, dumbest and most clichèd story yet I read.
Terrible grammar and punctuation errors aside, weakest plot going every which way but correct direction, objectifying and sexualising the main heroine, nothing but extremely one dimensional characters...you wrote the perfect soap opera yet.
5/1/2014 c23 PoshKimberlee
I liked your story alot even though the ending didn't go my way . Reese , Reg, Hanna , Charlie , Lillian deserved nothing but jail . They were all so conniving and kept bypassing that they kidnapped Jude. Oh and her selfish sister only wanting Jude for herself I wish Jude would of found out about her sister part . She completely forgot its her sister who set her up with Reese .
I liked your story alot even though the ending didn't go my way . Reese , Reg, Hanna , Charlie , Lillian deserved nothing but jail . They were all so conniving and kept bypassing that they kidnapped Jude. Oh and her selfish sister only wanting Jude for herself I wish Jude would of found out about her sister part . She completely forgot its her sister who set her up with Reese .
12/30/2012 c23 
6Carmel March
I was so excited to see a new update for this story! Wonderful job, and I'm looking forward to seeing how everything turns out in the end :)
6Carmel MarchI was so excited to see a new update for this story! Wonderful job, and I'm looking forward to seeing how everything turns out in the end :)
10/1/2012 c22 Reader
You have been changing this story for quite sometime and now a writer's block. Better not write one in the beginning cause you are starting to be a disappointment...you started good but now I don't know anymore...
Sorry but I am being honest here now...
You have been changing this story for quite sometime and now a writer's block. Better not write one in the beginning cause you are starting to be a disappointment...you started good but now I don't know anymore...
Sorry but I am being honest here now...
9/8/2012 c22 skye real
Oh hell to the NO! How can she marry that dude? Why is Roland taking too long to find her! Intriguing and compelling story line. I seriously like Gabriel and I so hope for a happy ending for them. That Henri family is a bunch of maniacs! Seriously!
Like the story line.
Oh hell to the NO! How can she marry that dude? Why is Roland taking too long to find her! Intriguing and compelling story line. I seriously like Gabriel and I so hope for a happy ending for them. That Henri family is a bunch of maniacs! Seriously!
Like the story line.
8/18/2012 c22 6Carmel March
Sorry it's taken me so long to review! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, though. Can't wait for more!
6Carmel MarchSorry it's taken me so long to review! I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, though. Can't wait for more!
8/11/2012 c2 Everling
So maybe I need to read more but I really don't understand why she doesn't just show him the paperwork stating the penthouse is now hers and/or call the cops. Why is she letting him keep her hostage? And how did he decide that was the best decision? He is already threatening to have sex with her knowing she was somehow involved with his brother? I'm sorry but I really don't like Van already and I hope they don't end up together. I can't stand people with this type of attitude.
So maybe I need to read more but I really don't understand why she doesn't just show him the paperwork stating the penthouse is now hers and/or call the cops. Why is she letting him keep her hostage? And how did he decide that was the best decision? He is already threatening to have sex with her knowing she was somehow involved with his brother? I'm sorry but I really don't like Van already and I hope they don't end up together. I can't stand people with this type of attitude.
8/10/2012 c22 4The Phoenix Girl
Oh I can't believe they're making her marry Reeze :( it's obvious that she hates him! How could her parents be so selfish?! Selling her away in such a manner! I really feel sorry for Jude :(
Great chapter! :)
4The Phoenix GirlOh I can't believe they're making her marry Reeze :( it's obvious that she hates him! How could her parents be so selfish?! Selling her away in such a manner! I really feel sorry for Jude :(
Great chapter! :)
8/9/2012 c22 2renegade01
dude, i'm just glad you updated. get your butt moving Gabriel! ;) this reminds me a bit of the scene from Shrek where donkey says you have to wait until she's about to say 'I do' and then get in there... hehe. can't wait for more. ;)
2renegade01dude, i'm just glad you updated. get your butt moving Gabriel! ;) this reminds me a bit of the scene from Shrek where donkey says you have to wait until she's about to say 'I do' and then get in there... hehe. can't wait for more. ;)
8/9/2012 c22 MCGonzalez
I was so happy to see you update! I hope Van comes to rescue Jude. One question though what happend with the conversation between Ro and Van, about Van getting married, and how would that help? Update soon!
I was so happy to see you update! I hope Van comes to rescue Jude. One question though what happend with the conversation between Ro and Van, about Van getting married, and how would that help? Update soon!
6/13/2012 c21 6Carmel March
Holy moly, this story is amazing. I am so happy I stumbled on this. I love everything about it - the characters, the cuteness, the chemistry, the plot, all of it! Hope to read more soon :)
6Carmel MarchHoly moly, this story is amazing. I am so happy I stumbled on this. I love everything about it - the characters, the cuteness, the chemistry, the plot, all of it! Hope to read more soon :)