for The Vanity Affair5/28/2011 c11 partialtodifference
You updated! Yay!
I don't think I like Hannah... she sounds like a mother who sacrificed a lot, but I just cannot believe her... seems to me she got in a hot spot and she did what she had to do to survive herself...
It might be too early on but she's not telling the truth and even if she does, then it's not all of it. Could Charles be Jude's dad? No, he couldn't... Is Gabriel a biological Henri at all? Linda is not his mother but is his father, his biological father? Could Tristan be his father?
A million questions! That's how much I really like the story!
Don't keep me waiting too much! I can't take it, I'm a weak woman. Hahahahaha
You updated! Yay!
I don't think I like Hannah... she sounds like a mother who sacrificed a lot, but I just cannot believe her... seems to me she got in a hot spot and she did what she had to do to survive herself...
It might be too early on but she's not telling the truth and even if she does, then it's not all of it. Could Charles be Jude's dad? No, he couldn't... Is Gabriel a biological Henri at all? Linda is not his mother but is his father, his biological father? Could Tristan be his father?
A million questions! That's how much I really like the story!
Don't keep me waiting too much! I can't take it, I'm a weak woman. Hahahahaha
5/22/2011 c10 
6EmmaWoodhouse88
That is so weird! J hadn't guessed that Hanna was actually jude's mother. That brings a whole new twist. Was she sleeping with someone, got pregnant and ran off? And Charles knew because he had caught her and wanted to get rid of her anyway, and used that as a way? Now my mind is full of even more ideas. I can't wait to seenwhat happens next!
6EmmaWoodhouse88That is so weird! J hadn't guessed that Hanna was actually jude's mother. That brings a whole new twist. Was she sleeping with someone, got pregnant and ran off? And Charles knew because he had caught her and wanted to get rid of her anyway, and used that as a way? Now my mind is full of even more ideas. I can't wait to seenwhat happens next!
5/22/2011 c10 MadeUpStories
Oops! That review with no name was me, though I was logged in and I wasn't...
Oops! That review with no name was me, though I was logged in and I wasn't...
5/22/2011 c10 Guest
Whoa! I really didn't think that Jude was gonna be related to Hanna, I just assumed it was a coincidence that they looked alike. So, that last part really shocked me!
Another great chapter. Hope theres more updates soon, can't wait to read more :D
Whoa! I really didn't think that Jude was gonna be related to Hanna, I just assumed it was a coincidence that they looked alike. So, that last part really shocked me!
Another great chapter. Hope theres more updates soon, can't wait to read more :D
5/22/2011 c10 partialtodifference
I like it very much! Van is just a tease!
Story unfolds nicely... Interested to see what Hanna tells them!
I like it very much! Van is just a tease!
Story unfolds nicely... Interested to see what Hanna tells them!
5/22/2011 c10 Steph
Hi this story is taking an interesting twist I like it can't wait to see what happens
Hi this story is taking an interesting twist I like it can't wait to see what happens
5/16/2011 c9 EmmaWoodhouse88
It's petting me review again! Yay! And Charles said that about Jude! That's so hypocritical! Especially since it was false. And whats with her switching gears like that? I can't wait to see what happens next!
It's petting me review again! Yay! And Charles said that about Jude! That's so hypocritical! Especially since it was false. And whats with her switching gears like that? I can't wait to see what happens next!
5/10/2011 c8 MCGonzalez
Yay you updated! Liked the chapter can't wait to see what happens next, update soon!
Yay you updated! Liked the chapter can't wait to see what happens next, update soon!
5/10/2011 c8 mylittlePRINCESS
you are so funny love the chapter they are frindly now love it more please
you are so funny love the chapter they are frindly now love it more please
5/10/2011 c8 fanofyourstory
please, please, please continue writing. i am hooked. :D i absolutely love this story
please, please, please continue writing. i am hooked. :D i absolutely love this story
5/10/2011 c8 Lauren
I quite enjoy this story, I found it out of luck the other day and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Gabriel/Van is wonderful, I want someone like that!...though without the whole tortured artist for real thing.
The plot is rather interesting and is intriguing - only thing I would say is that I feel like Jude and Van got together far to quickly. Yes, they were physically attracted to each toher but I feel like it went from "I refuse to sleep with you" to "I'd like to have a relationship" far to quickly. Not a big deal at all but just thought I would leave something constructive :)
Keep up the awesome work and I shall be awaiting the next post!
I quite enjoy this story, I found it out of luck the other day and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Gabriel/Van is wonderful, I want someone like that!...though without the whole tortured artist for real thing.
The plot is rather interesting and is intriguing - only thing I would say is that I feel like Jude and Van got together far to quickly. Yes, they were physically attracted to each toher but I feel like it went from "I refuse to sleep with you" to "I'd like to have a relationship" far to quickly. Not a big deal at all but just thought I would leave something constructive :)
Keep up the awesome work and I shall be awaiting the next post!
5/10/2011 c8 EmmaWoodhouse88
Yay! lol. I lobed this chapter. It's nice to see them being playful. I can't wait to see what haPpens next!
Yay! lol. I lobed this chapter. It's nice to see them being playful. I can't wait to see what haPpens next!
5/8/2011 c7 MadeUpStories
NO! Don't stop the updates! This story is amazing!
Sorry I haven't reviewed yet, I just started reading it! And I wanna know what happens, you can't leave it there! :'(
Like I said, the story is great. It's one of best I've read for a while, most of the stories on FP are pretty much about the same things but to me this is original. I've never read a story like it.
Please continue with the story, but if you really need to stop then I understand.
Danielle
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NO! Don't stop the updates! This story is amazing!
Sorry I haven't reviewed yet, I just started reading it! And I wanna know what happens, you can't leave it there! :'(
Like I said, the story is great. It's one of best I've read for a while, most of the stories on FP are pretty much about the same things but to me this is original. I've never read a story like it.
Please continue with the story, but if you really need to stop then I understand.
Danielle
xx