for The Vanity Affair12/7/2011 c17 Crisscrosscurls
Woah!
Life sure is hard out there . . . .
But don't worry. . . Work hard for your exam and yor so gonna nail it. . .xD
here in my country. . .you just have to clear the entrance exams and the govt. Pays for pretty much everything. . . . . . .
Woah!
Life sure is hard out there . . . .
But don't worry. . . Work hard for your exam and yor so gonna nail it. . .xD
here in my country. . .you just have to clear the entrance exams and the govt. Pays for pretty much everything. . . . . . .
12/6/2011 c17 Jane
Dear Jude,
Thanks for tells us, your awesome readers :)
Hope you do fantastic on your exams.
Can't wait for you to come back and finish :)
Dear Jude,
Thanks for tells us, your awesome readers :)
Hope you do fantastic on your exams.
Can't wait for you to come back and finish :)
11/12/2011 c16 kathreen
I feel like something really bad is going to happen in this date. That Reese guy should be really really careful..he doesn't want to mess with an angry Gabriel Henri. :)
I feel like something really bad is going to happen in this date. That Reese guy should be really really careful..he doesn't want to mess with an angry Gabriel Henri. :)
11/11/2011 c16 
2xxjoceyuxx
This story is just so interesting. There's so many different things going on, the Henri's is just one fucked up family. Loving the story!
2xxjoceyuxxThis story is just so interesting. There's so many different things going on, the Henri's is just one fucked up family. Loving the story!
11/11/2011 c1 1Susan Holt
I'm not really reviewing chapter 1, but I've already reviewed the latest chapter in the first edition...
Kind of a new chapter, right? I remember parts of the previous version chapter but there are definitely new and improved parts as well. I liked it very much! I still cannot decide who is worse. Samantha or Hanna? Both are evil and should 'go' somehow at the end of the story. Please, make sure everyone gets what they deserve at the end. Justice shall prevail! I have faith in you. :)
It was scary seeing how Hanna and Reggie are ready to sell their daughter for money and Sam... dude! She is a total case... I'm talking really clinical and all... Is she married in this version, I can't remember.
The fight between Sam and Van during dinner made me bonkers! I wanted to punch Sam badly. Van too... a bit. Shocking thing, but at one point in the chapter, I felt like slapping Jude as well! It felt weird to me how she stubbornly and suddenly wanted Van to let her go cause he was hosling her back... I mean, I understnad that she is hurt and in love and therefore totally blind to common reason... but it felt weird to me that one day she wants to take over the world with him and the next she thinks he's holding her back! I love her though, just because of that craziness!
I like this new version much better! :)
1Susan HoltI'm not really reviewing chapter 1, but I've already reviewed the latest chapter in the first edition...
Kind of a new chapter, right? I remember parts of the previous version chapter but there are definitely new and improved parts as well. I liked it very much! I still cannot decide who is worse. Samantha or Hanna? Both are evil and should 'go' somehow at the end of the story. Please, make sure everyone gets what they deserve at the end. Justice shall prevail! I have faith in you. :)
It was scary seeing how Hanna and Reggie are ready to sell their daughter for money and Sam... dude! She is a total case... I'm talking really clinical and all... Is she married in this version, I can't remember.
The fight between Sam and Van during dinner made me bonkers! I wanted to punch Sam badly. Van too... a bit. Shocking thing, but at one point in the chapter, I felt like slapping Jude as well! It felt weird to me how she stubbornly and suddenly wanted Van to let her go cause he was hosling her back... I mean, I understnad that she is hurt and in love and therefore totally blind to common reason... but it felt weird to me that one day she wants to take over the world with him and the next she thinks he's holding her back! I love her though, just because of that craziness!
I like this new version much better! :)
11/10/2011 c16 Nomad
Somehow, too much drama in the story is not good.
I still like this but I'm hoping the relationship between Jude and Van is going to help clear...so far...there's none...
Somehow, too much drama in the story is not good.
I still like this but I'm hoping the relationship between Jude and Van is going to help clear...so far...there's none...
11/10/2011 c16 2renegade01
Its like we're just waiting for something to go down...
'Sibling from hell' made me grin. ;)
2renegade01Its like we're just waiting for something to go down...
'Sibling from hell' made me grin. ;)
11/8/2011 c15 mylittleprincess
interesting chapter, update soon please.
interesting chapter, update soon please.
11/6/2011 c15 Juniper33
Im friggin addicted to this story.. its so dramatic and theres so many different stories! im confused but i freaking love it! I hope you post soon!
Im friggin addicted to this story.. its so dramatic and theres so many different stories! im confused but i freaking love it! I hope you post soon!
11/5/2011 c15 1Susan Holt
That is a new chapter right? Cause I don't remember it in the previous version. I enjoyed it so much! You have done a great job with the dialogues again! I think the meeting between Sam & Hanna is a nice touch... it was a nice addition and it showed us their motives & feelings. Vile creatures both of them. Sam should be ashamed of herself! Hanna, I think she was born a criminal... I loved, loved, LOVED Jude & Van's conversation! They're so good together! I want them together! Why don't you send Reese to me, so Jude can be with Van. I'm just selfishly willing to sacrifice myself for the couple. *angel*
1Susan HoltThat is a new chapter right? Cause I don't remember it in the previous version. I enjoyed it so much! You have done a great job with the dialogues again! I think the meeting between Sam & Hanna is a nice touch... it was a nice addition and it showed us their motives & feelings. Vile creatures both of them. Sam should be ashamed of herself! Hanna, I think she was born a criminal... I loved, loved, LOVED Jude & Van's conversation! They're so good together! I want them together! Why don't you send Reese to me, so Jude can be with Van. I'm just selfishly willing to sacrifice myself for the couple. *angel*