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8/11/2011 c4 Punslinger
You paint such intense pictures of life's agony that, if the quality of your art wasn't so high, would be unbearable. Let us read more soon.
7/17/2011 c3 Angel-Vampire-Demon
Keep on writing fantastic poetry!

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7/9/2011 c3 Punslinger
Thanks for allowing us to follow along as your mind takes A Dark Turn.

"...I can only run wild/When I'm asleep." That is a truth, but not a pitiful one. Our wakeful hours give us the opportunity to tame our unconscious wildness so that it doesn't harm others, or ourselves.
5/31/2011 c2 Sakura Reyna
You're right...the things that humanity has done are disgusting, and we do need to think more often. Sometimes I have a dark thought and I regret being human sometimes...only sometimes.
5/31/2011 c1 Sakura Reyna
Dark corners represent the places that we are afraid to go. That's what I think when I read this poem.
4/21/2011 c2 Punslinger
"...but a society feeding on remains would still thrive."

That might be the most powerful line of a poem that I've yet read. Robert Frost may not have been flattered to have inspired this gloomy descent into nihilism, but I think he would have been as impressed as I am by your precocious talent.
4/21/2011 c2 asklefjaeihog
Very nice. I like the imagery of a 'film of ugliness'.

Keep on ;)

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