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8/23/2003 c1 11Starknight
This fic deserves respect simple because of it's size and of course the excellent writing...
6/1/2003 c1 3Forsakn
You have talent, definitely. But the storyline itself reminds me of a book called 'Rift' or something .. Did your ideas stem from there?
2/5/2003 c1 voicesinthedark
great story
3/5/2002 c1 1Sick Little Fiend
You are amazing! You have real talent, you know.
11/13/2001 c1 Kurai Yuko
What a great story! You got a pretty creative mind!
7/11/2001 c1 16PatrickTheWriter
i'm up to chapter 6 and I am already enjoying this. There are a few comments I am going to make now, before I forget, more backstory and more development of the world. The major action seems to be about to happen, but I really don't know why or what's really going on. Funny thing is though, I really could see this as one of those long promised Prequels to the Dune series about how tyhing were long before the Imperium and the Butlerian Jihad. This is really cool.
7/9/2001 c1 towers7
I loved it! That was absolutely fantastic! =) Keep up the good work...please!
6/6/2001 c1 1Sparks
I thought that was pretty good.
5/23/2001 c1 1Lady Dante
This was GREAT! I love it! How about a series? I'd definitely read more!
5/22/2001 c1 2Lennera Darser
I read so little of this and marvel at your talent! I wish some of my work was as good as yours and have printed this off in order to read it all! ^_^

Please continue working and never let Writer's Block get at you, I just use a chisel. Your story was great and sorry for taking so long to write this!

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