for Out of the Night1/31/2017 c27 navigator101
I randomly went looking for this fic the other day. Couldn't remember the name, so I had to go digging through my email to find you and hope the fic was still around. It's still great, but it still tears at my heart that she's not with Apollo. They were so close, and it doesn't look like they're going to be reunited as the next fic finishes up her years at school. Will you ever tell me if they meet again and just who she was supposed to end up with? I don't remember the original well enough to know who all the contenders were, but I never quite saw Ioulas as a love interest. Best friend and possibly brother, yes but not love interest. I could totally be wrong, but that was just my impression both times through.
Off to read the second half now!
I randomly went looking for this fic the other day. Couldn't remember the name, so I had to go digging through my email to find you and hope the fic was still around. It's still great, but it still tears at my heart that she's not with Apollo. They were so close, and it doesn't look like they're going to be reunited as the next fic finishes up her years at school. Will you ever tell me if they meet again and just who she was supposed to end up with? I don't remember the original well enough to know who all the contenders were, but I never quite saw Ioulas as a love interest. Best friend and possibly brother, yes but not love interest. I could totally be wrong, but that was just my impression both times through.
Off to read the second half now!
8/13/2015 c10 Guest
If I knew that there was character death in this story, I might not have read it. Next time, perhaps you could include a TW (trigger warning) in your story's summary? Other than that, it's actually quite well written, though it can feel a *little* bit rushed at times.
Thanks.
If I knew that there was character death in this story, I might not have read it. Next time, perhaps you could include a TW (trigger warning) in your story's summary? Other than that, it's actually quite well written, though it can feel a *little* bit rushed at times.
Thanks.
9/21/2014 c27 
9NovemberRose1
The story line was confusing to the fact hay you kept changing names on everyone, and also you had way too many characters with mostly the same character attributes. This would be a good story, but it needs a plot line, not just a day in and day out type of story line. It needs a plot, it needs a climax, and we didn't get the climax in this one. As I said, this would be a good story, it just needs some work. And I agree with the other reviewers, this story is def not done, and it is for the reason that you don't have that climax.
9NovemberRose1The story line was confusing to the fact hay you kept changing names on everyone, and also you had way too many characters with mostly the same character attributes. This would be a good story, but it needs a plot line, not just a day in and day out type of story line. It needs a plot, it needs a climax, and we didn't get the climax in this one. As I said, this would be a good story, it just needs some work. And I agree with the other reviewers, this story is def not done, and it is for the reason that you don't have that climax.
6/6/2012 c27 Random
It's not done... well at least it doesn't feel done. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I love you, my beautiful author for writing and posting it :D
It's not done... well at least it doesn't feel done. I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and I love you, my beautiful author for writing and posting it :D
8/22/2011 c13 The Red Raven
I liked the story so far,but now it's getting confusing.At first,I thought you adapted all the gods and goddesses of different pantheons into an academy for gods.Then I find out that they're simply named after the gods and goddesses.But now they change their names completely.(although I did like how you renamed them as Irish gods and heroes.)not that I don't like this and heck,don't change it at all,just saying.
I liked the story so far,but now it's getting confusing.At first,I thought you adapted all the gods and goddesses of different pantheons into an academy for gods.Then I find out that they're simply named after the gods and goddesses.But now they change their names completely.(although I did like how you renamed them as Irish gods and heroes.)not that I don't like this and heck,don't change it at all,just saying.
5/5/2011 c27 6Becca118
Just finished reading the new version and I think the effort you've put into editing your story is fantastic :D
Becca x
6Becca118Just finished reading the new version and I think the effort you've put into editing your story is fantastic :D
Becca x
5/3/2011 c4 Becca118
I'm loving the re-write so far! All the extra details you've added in are really helping to bring the story together while keeping the original plot line. Still got a lot of chapters to read yet, but a good effort and I haven't noticed any big grammar or spelling mistakes. Well done :)
Becca
I'm loving the re-write so far! All the extra details you've added in are really helping to bring the story together while keeping the original plot line. Still got a lot of chapters to read yet, but a good effort and I haven't noticed any big grammar or spelling mistakes. Well done :)
Becca