for It all began with a letter1/24/2022 c1 raesi01
What a great story.. Hi, I like your novel and I wanna give you an offer that related to your work. Would you mind give me your email to discuss the details further
What a great story.. Hi, I like your novel and I wanna give you an offer that related to your work. Would you mind give me your email to discuss the details further
1/29/2019 c11 Reecie
I was so hoping for a part 2 as was promised. I'm pretty sure you have at least a little written out otherwise you wouldn't have promised it. Regardless, that part 2 has yet to reach the galaxy that is the internet. Or at least to my knowledge it hasn't.
This review was simply to say that your writing is captivating and will be missed especially in these incomplete works. I do hope you shall one day return and have me at the edge of my seat again. Until then, a girl can dream.
I was so hoping for a part 2 as was promised. I'm pretty sure you have at least a little written out otherwise you wouldn't have promised it. Regardless, that part 2 has yet to reach the galaxy that is the internet. Or at least to my knowledge it hasn't.
This review was simply to say that your writing is captivating and will be missed especially in these incomplete works. I do hope you shall one day return and have me at the edge of my seat again. Until then, a girl can dream.
4/1/2017 c11 Guest
Plz plz plz continue it! I love this story so much!
Plz plz plz continue it! I love this story so much!
1/22/2017 c11 Marchipuka
I'm sad that there hasn't been a recent update to this story, and it was so very engaging too!
Your writing skills are impeccable and I really, really hope you decide to pick this up again soon. I even have it bookmarked on my webpage.
I'm sad that there hasn't been a recent update to this story, and it was so very engaging too!
Your writing skills are impeccable and I really, really hope you decide to pick this up again soon. I even have it bookmarked on my webpage.
8/7/2015 c11 2020202020
*Bangs head on wall* Christian this is a stupid idea! I was so happy when I saw this new chapter and you didn't disappoint. Can't wait for part two! :D
*Bangs head on wall* Christian this is a stupid idea! I was so happy when I saw this new chapter and you didn't disappoint. Can't wait for part two! :D
8/2/2015 c11 
1Everfew
It was good, and I hope to see more soon. There are some mistakes here and there in every chapter, mostly you forgetting a letter or a dialogue mark, but it isn't that much and doesn't distract too much from the story. However, some of the times when you forget a latter in a word (like you writing 'naed' in this chapter instead of 'naked'), well your spellcheck should've caught that. So keep a sharp eye on what your spellcheck tells you, as it is a useful tool.
1EverfewIt was good, and I hope to see more soon. There are some mistakes here and there in every chapter, mostly you forgetting a letter or a dialogue mark, but it isn't that much and doesn't distract too much from the story. However, some of the times when you forget a latter in a word (like you writing 'naed' in this chapter instead of 'naked'), well your spellcheck should've caught that. So keep a sharp eye on what your spellcheck tells you, as it is a useful tool.
8/2/2015 c10 Everfew
Oh, noticed a small typo. The very last line of this story, the bit in italics:
'at least my erections gone'
It should be:
'at least my erection's gone'
erection's - it's the possessive form
erections - means there are several of them.
Oh, noticed a small typo. The very last line of this story, the bit in italics:
'at least my erections gone'
It should be:
'at least my erection's gone'
erection's - it's the possessive form
erections - means there are several of them.
8/2/2015 c9 Everfew
Well, the hunter is a bit dumb to tell him all her plans when the vampire can read minds.
Well, the hunter is a bit dumb to tell him all her plans when the vampire can read minds.
8/2/2015 c8 Everfew
You know, it feels like every chapter I read has a message with you saying sorry for taking so long to update. This one indicates you ipdated after a two years long wait. If I ever do favourite this story, I should probably get used to horredously long waiting periods.
You know, it feels like every chapter I read has a message with you saying sorry for taking so long to update. This one indicates you ipdated after a two years long wait. If I ever do favourite this story, I should probably get used to horredously long waiting periods.
8/2/2015 c7 Everfew
When describing the type of girls Christian likkes, you wrote 'we,,-defined' instead of 'well-defined'.
When describing the type of girls Christian likkes, you wrote 'we,,-defined' instead of 'well-defined'.
8/2/2015 c6 Everfew
It's reasonnable to believe Joshua is something other than a vampire. Good that they try using their brains a bit to make sense of what they've seen.
It's reasonnable to believe Joshua is something other than a vampire. Good that they try using their brains a bit to make sense of what they've seen.
8/2/2015 c4 Everfew
So the garlic allergy could mean he's part vampire, or I might be reading too much into this.
So the garlic allergy could mean he's part vampire, or I might be reading too much into this.