for It all began with a letter8/2/2015 c3 
1Everfew
Perhaps the vampire was promised a number of humans, and someone from Christian's bloodline was on the list?
1EverfewPerhaps the vampire was promised a number of humans, and someone from Christian's bloodline was on the list?
8/2/2015 c2 Everfew
I was half-expecting the vampire to be a policeman or something, and to go all 'hello, Christian' when arriving to his house.
I was half-expecting the vampire to be a policeman or something, and to go all 'hello, Christian' when arriving to his house.
6/2/2015 c10 3morningstorm70
Poor Christian he should get a handle on those thoughts of his.
So looking forward to the next chapter.
3morningstorm70Poor Christian he should get a handle on those thoughts of his.
So looking forward to the next chapter.
5/30/2015 c10 2020202020
Well...He's screwed. ;) Joshua isn't going to be very nice to our poor Christian is he? Well Christian that's what you get when you try and betray a vampire that can read your mind. :) Silly boy! I will wait with anticipation for your next update, see you then! :D
Well...He's screwed. ;) Joshua isn't going to be very nice to our poor Christian is he? Well Christian that's what you get when you try and betray a vampire that can read your mind. :) Silly boy! I will wait with anticipation for your next update, see you then! :D
5/29/2015 c10 Guest
Holy crap. this is awesome! More! More! More!
Holy crap. this is awesome! More! More! More!
5/29/2015 c10 4Ney13
Can't wait for them to actually like one another, and then they'll both be all hot and bothered! (And get me the same, probs).
I don't know if you're still doing suggestions for the first sentence, but I'll go ahead and give you mine for your next chapter!: "I thought tonight would be the best night ever, but I don't know if I've ever been more wrong." Hope you like it!
4Ney13Can't wait for them to actually like one another, and then they'll both be all hot and bothered! (And get me the same, probs).
I don't know if you're still doing suggestions for the first sentence, but I'll go ahead and give you mine for your next chapter!: "I thought tonight would be the best night ever, but I don't know if I've ever been more wrong." Hope you like it!
5/1/2015 c9 2020202020
OOOOHHHH, Christian, Joshua is gonna kill you! I seriously love this story and cannot wait for more! :)
OOOOHHHH, Christian, Joshua is gonna kill you! I seriously love this story and cannot wait for more! :)
4/7/2015 c8 2020202020
YEEESSSSSS! FINALLY! I have wanted this for sooooo long, and it's such a good chapter as well! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
*Cough*
Excuse me, a fantastic chapter dear.
:D
YEEESSSSSS! FINALLY! I have wanted this for sooooo long, and it's such a good chapter as well! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
*Cough*
Excuse me, a fantastic chapter dear.
:D
1/27/2015 c8 morningstorm70
Reading for a second time please continue I want to know what happens next!
Reading for a second time please continue I want to know what happens next!
1/24/2015 c3 Laonasa Enllyn Avery
Erszebet Vathory- hungarian noble, or Elizabeth Bathory in English, I think.
Erszebet Vathory- hungarian noble, or Elizabeth Bathory in English, I think.
1/24/2015 c3 Lea
I guess that woman is Erszebet Bathory, or Elizabet in English. A hungarian noble? I think? and then there's Vlad Chepeshi or the sort.
I guess that woman is Erszebet Bathory, or Elizabet in English. A hungarian noble? I think? and then there's Vlad Chepeshi or the sort.
1/2/2015 c3 1OneHappyVirus
I'm really liking the story so far, despite the few spelling/gramatical errors. The only issue I have at this point is that you pointedly referred to Christian's parents by their first name. With the story being told by Christian, I feel that knowing his parent's name seems unnecessary, but calling them by name draws me completely out of the story. He refers to them as Mom and Dad when speaking and I feel that he should refer to them as that as the story continues rather than "Kiera" and "Daniel". Otherwise, it confuses the reader and draws them out of the story rather than keeping them transfixed on your words.
1OneHappyVirusI'm really liking the story so far, despite the few spelling/gramatical errors. The only issue I have at this point is that you pointedly referred to Christian's parents by their first name. With the story being told by Christian, I feel that knowing his parent's name seems unnecessary, but calling them by name draws me completely out of the story. He refers to them as Mom and Dad when speaking and I feel that he should refer to them as that as the story continues rather than "Kiera" and "Daniel". Otherwise, it confuses the reader and draws them out of the story rather than keeping them transfixed on your words.