6/4/2011 c2 2Violet Thelaw
I tried to read it, and you were right! It isn't my kind of thing, because we are opposites! You are really, REALLY poetic, and you have a wide range of vocabulary! And your wording is AMAZING. I love how I can be amazed with the most random things, like "sucking face with a Coca Cola bottle." I wish I was that well with wording, too. It isn't my kind of thing because I only read shallow chick lit for beginners. Haha. And that's what I write! Shallow chick lit. I also read anything with lovers in it. The "deepest" thing I've read is Harry Potter. I'm a TOTAL BABY!
Your English is FLAWLESS. It's pretty obvious you've been speaking good English your whole life. Why don't you try writing chick lit, too, but with your amazing wording and stuff? ;) Or maybe that's not your type... but, good luck with stuff! =)
I tried to read it, and you were right! It isn't my kind of thing, because we are opposites! You are really, REALLY poetic, and you have a wide range of vocabulary! And your wording is AMAZING. I love how I can be amazed with the most random things, like "sucking face with a Coca Cola bottle." I wish I was that well with wording, too. It isn't my kind of thing because I only read shallow chick lit for beginners. Haha. And that's what I write! Shallow chick lit. I also read anything with lovers in it. The "deepest" thing I've read is Harry Potter. I'm a TOTAL BABY!
Your English is FLAWLESS. It's pretty obvious you've been speaking good English your whole life. Why don't you try writing chick lit, too, but with your amazing wording and stuff? ;) Or maybe that's not your type... but, good luck with stuff! =)
4/28/2011 c1 1Lady Anteater
Hello! This first chapter is pretty intense; I enjoyed it :D The way you describe the setting gives me this perfect mental image of a dark, cold, horrible night... perfect for some sort of mysterious death! It read really smoothly, and I'm wondering what happened to the victim.
Hello! This first chapter is pretty intense; I enjoyed it :D The way you describe the setting gives me this perfect mental image of a dark, cold, horrible night... perfect for some sort of mysterious death! It read really smoothly, and I'm wondering what happened to the victim.