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for The One You Left Behind

7/14/2011 c1 4Reeciez
Sorry, I'm so sorry! I don't know what for but I'm sorry! I just wanna sit and cry now. Good song, BtW. ~^,^~
5/9/2011 c1 37My Precious Purr
I had tears in my eyes reading this. This is exactly how I feel about my best friend right now.
5/8/2011 c1 15Katalina Tomas
I loved the way you wrote this, with the metaphors and all.
5/8/2011 c1 cab fed hig
"Just a ghost with not a soul to bury" - so deep. my favorite line.

i'd just love to hear this musically.

"..legend to lead", "lost soul on a lonesome..", "I hope I haunt", "leaving behind a life", "pray your road is paved", "stop and stare" - your consistent alliteration is so ideal for a song.

"So now the hero dies without a legend" - your transitioning is brilliant and makes for a compelling bridge.

"I am crushed and naught but bones and rust" - another of my favorite parts.

i can tell that you are an accomplished songwriter. this is so emotionally searing and intense. your vocabulary is original and harmonious.

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