
8/6/2016 c16 liquid light
So is it true that there's going to be a sequel?
So is it true that there's going to be a sequel?
7/7/2014 c15 AnimalLover411
It's been over 2 years! When can we get an update?! What happens with Sasha and James? And Aros?
It's been over 2 years! When can we get an update?! What happens with Sasha and James? And Aros?
10/10/2013 c15 White Angel 57
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! Why must it end here?! DX This is beautifully wriitten & has several emotions trigger. Please update again, I can't take it if this never continues! D;
WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! Why must it end here?! DX This is beautifully wriitten & has several emotions trigger. Please update again, I can't take it if this never continues! D;
6/1/2013 c2 maddie
Um.. i take it English is your 3rd or more language? I would say get a beta reader before posting your work... Apart from that, good work.
Um.. i take it English is your 3rd or more language? I would say get a beta reader before posting your work... Apart from that, good work.
12/11/2012 c15
5Huyu-kun
I like the way you have the characters grow and the whole twist. Can't wait for more!

I like the way you have the characters grow and the whole twist. Can't wait for more!
7/7/2012 c1
7Wild rogue
Wow, loved it. Never herd pf male pregnancy before but really enjoying it so far. Kain is an butt hole.
I love that.
The only thing that could be worked on is the endings of words. Mainly with 'ed' and 's'

Wow, loved it. Never herd pf male pregnancy before but really enjoying it so far. Kain is an butt hole.
I love that.
The only thing that could be worked on is the endings of words. Mainly with 'ed' and 's'
6/16/2012 c15 Manga-FanFic.Fan
If you don't got any BETA already for this wonderful story, I would love to be yours... :3
If you don't got any BETA already for this wonderful story, I would love to be yours... :3
3/30/2012 c15 anydayanywhere
Another great chapter. Aros is really strong despite what has been happening to him so far. Excited to find out what happens next! :D
Another great chapter. Aros is really strong despite what has been happening to him so far. Excited to find out what happens next! :D
3/25/2012 c15
75WolfletteMoon
Sorry I didn't review earlier.
I'm not normally a huge fan of M-preg stories, but I have to say you write it extremely well. You've managed to keep the characters and their reactions more-or-less believable, which is something a lot of writers seem to struggle with here.
Your grammar seems to have gotten better, too :) But if you do need any help with it, I would be more that happy to help you.
The plot's coming along quite nicely. I love how Aros has grown to love the babies, he deserves some happiness.
I was also listening to music as I read this, and found a song that seems to fit Aros and James quite well - Моё сердце by КИТАЙ. It's all in Russian, so you might need to look up the english translation of the lyrics, but it seems to fit them perfectly :)

Sorry I didn't review earlier.
I'm not normally a huge fan of M-preg stories, but I have to say you write it extremely well. You've managed to keep the characters and their reactions more-or-less believable, which is something a lot of writers seem to struggle with here.
Your grammar seems to have gotten better, too :) But if you do need any help with it, I would be more that happy to help you.
The plot's coming along quite nicely. I love how Aros has grown to love the babies, he deserves some happiness.
I was also listening to music as I read this, and found a song that seems to fit Aros and James quite well - Моё сердце by КИТАЙ. It's all in Russian, so you might need to look up the english translation of the lyrics, but it seems to fit them perfectly :)
3/25/2012 c15
6A.H. Nox
Long time no read! It's heartbreaking as ever! I am still hooked. The back and forth of James' emotions are a little...cliche(?), but you do such a good job with it! One thing...
[Jane jumped and held on to her chest "Wow, you scared me Ro" Jane told him then smiled and kissed his cheek.]
This is in the beginning. What is the "Ro" for? Was that supposed to be a beginning of another word/name?
AWAITING THE SEQUEL ALREADY!

Long time no read! It's heartbreaking as ever! I am still hooked. The back and forth of James' emotions are a little...cliche(?), but you do such a good job with it! One thing...
[Jane jumped and held on to her chest "Wow, you scared me Ro" Jane told him then smiled and kissed his cheek.]
This is in the beginning. What is the "Ro" for? Was that supposed to be a beginning of another word/name?
AWAITING THE SEQUEL ALREADY!
3/19/2012 c14 anydayanywhere
Yeah I was definitely surprised but then again, surprises within in a story is always great. :D
Somehow, I feel like everyone is treating Aros unfairly...
Yeah I was definitely surprised but then again, surprises within in a story is always great. :D
Somehow, I feel like everyone is treating Aros unfairly...
3/17/2012 c14 NenaFrankie2688
I was confused at first of who was who but then I re-read it. I thought it was well written.great job!
I was confused at first of who was who but then I re-read it. I thought it was well written.great job!
1/1/2012 c13 anydayanywhere
I am really excited to find out what's going to happen next now that Sasha died.
I am really excited to find out what's going to happen next now that Sasha died.