for ambrosia5/9/2011 c1 
21kunoichi-socks
I just loved this! It's evident that you are very intelligent annd talented by your word choices. The whole poem had a very dark feel to it which greatly appealed to me.
"as we give into the guilty pleasure
of craving what we can't taste –
ambrosia and sweet sweet confidence"
These are my favourite lines. Overall, it was an amazing poem. Excellent work!
- Kat
21kunoichi-socksI just loved this! It's evident that you are very intelligent annd talented by your word choices. The whole poem had a very dark feel to it which greatly appealed to me.
"as we give into the guilty pleasure
of craving what we can't taste –
ambrosia and sweet sweet confidence"
These are my favourite lines. Overall, it was an amazing poem. Excellent work!
- Kat