for Last Chance For One Last Dance8/13/2012 c1 SuperGulaman
Sigghh...It was one of the mind-enticing stories I've read. The flow and delivery of the events are good. Interesting. Thumbs up for you!
Nagkita na tayo...sa Hyperpanda. May talent ka pala. Keep it up! _
Sigghh...It was one of the mind-enticing stories I've read. The flow and delivery of the events are good. Interesting. Thumbs up for you!
Nagkita na tayo...sa Hyperpanda. May talent ka pala. Keep it up! _
5/12/2011 c1 Hanna07
OH MY GOD! I was actually tearing up in there!
Although, i did see a couple of errors... maybe typos. But other than that, it was an amazing story. Short, but good. I still didn't understand why she died when he kissed her though. Mind explaining that part?
That's the only thing! I was serious about tearing up! It wouldn't be a bad idea to continue this story. Make more chapters out of this.
OH MY GOD! I was actually tearing up in there!
Although, i did see a couple of errors... maybe typos. But other than that, it was an amazing story. Short, but good. I still didn't understand why she died when he kissed her though. Mind explaining that part?
That's the only thing! I was serious about tearing up! It wouldn't be a bad idea to continue this story. Make more chapters out of this.