for Stop The World11/2/2012 c14 
2heyitsstupidme
This story is so amazing. I already read it one time when I didn't have a fictionpress account, but now I found it again and I finally leave a review.
I really like your writing - style. And now I need to read the sequel, because I hope there will be a happy - end. :)
2heyitsstupidmeThis story is so amazing. I already read it one time when I didn't have a fictionpress account, but now I found it again and I finally leave a review.
I really like your writing - style. And now I need to read the sequel, because I hope there will be a happy - end. :)
10/15/2011 c14 iwanttodeletethiswtf
Why? Why, why, why would you just leave it like that? I've been addicted to this story for the past few long hours and I can't believe you could end it like that. I feel like crying my eyes out, tearing my hair out, and screaming! It's just too sad.. You've written a great story. Really. It tugged on my heartstrings and now, it pretty much tored them apart :( Please hurry with the sequel. When I read that there would be one, I about cried. So, I can't wait for it. Thanks for this one, it's wonderful.. Love, -JB
Why? Why, why, why would you just leave it like that? I've been addicted to this story for the past few long hours and I can't believe you could end it like that. I feel like crying my eyes out, tearing my hair out, and screaming! It's just too sad.. You've written a great story. Really. It tugged on my heartstrings and now, it pretty much tored them apart :( Please hurry with the sequel. When I read that there would be one, I about cried. So, I can't wait for it. Thanks for this one, it's wonderful.. Love, -JB
9/28/2011 c14 Fumiki
Oh my god.
You CAN'T end it like this! Please start the sequel soon!
The last few chapters really made me cry... Kaydin should jist go ahead and tell Sydney he loves him. Or Sydney should at least told Kay who's his Shakespeare... That gonna solve a lot of their problem.
So... Sequel? Pleaseee? Have you start writing it?
Oh my god.
You CAN'T end it like this! Please start the sequel soon!
The last few chapters really made me cry... Kaydin should jist go ahead and tell Sydney he loves him. Or Sydney should at least told Kay who's his Shakespeare... That gonna solve a lot of their problem.
So... Sequel? Pleaseee? Have you start writing it?
8/25/2011 c14 4yaoi8808
OMG! I don't know if this was the best or worst ending. I guess Kaydin really did need that kick. Have you started on the sequel yet? I can't wait for that!
4yaoi8808OMG! I don't know if this was the best or worst ending. I guess Kaydin really did need that kick. Have you started on the sequel yet? I can't wait for that!
7/19/2011 c12 yaoi8808
OMG! I bet I know who Sydney's "Shakespeare" is . . . THE ONEEEEE . . . THE ONLY . . . . . . . KAYDIN!
OMG! I bet I know who Sydney's "Shakespeare" is . . . THE ONEEEEE . . . THE ONLY . . . . . . . KAYDIN!
7/9/2011 c11 2completeandtotalrandomness
Okay I love this story far and how it's progressing and I think I know what his name is now. XD Hakuna Matata is the best song EVER!
2completeandtotalrandomnessOkay I love this story far and how it's progressing and I think I know what his name is now. XD Hakuna Matata is the best song EVER!
6/18/2011 c10 4yaoi8808
Soooooooo, I TOTALLY think I'm right with the name, and I'm guessing that Kayd- isn't too happy with the palm readings. You have any idea how many more chapters? I'M SOOOOO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! Cool thing with learning tarot cards and palm reading! Can't wait for the next chapter!
4yaoi8808Soooooooo, I TOTALLY think I'm right with the name, and I'm guessing that Kayd- isn't too happy with the palm readings. You have any idea how many more chapters? I'M SOOOOO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! Cool thing with learning tarot cards and palm reading! Can't wait for the next chapter!
6/14/2011 c9 4Blank Papyrus
I really want to know what is up with Sydney! And I will wait as long as I need to for the next chapter. :)
4Blank PapyrusI really want to know what is up with Sydney! And I will wait as long as I need to for the next chapter. :)
6/9/2011 c8 4yaoi8808
Awwwwwww, such a sweet chapter! So the narrator's name is KA- Any hints? That's a really funny story about DQ :D
4yaoi8808Awwwwwww, such a sweet chapter! So the narrator's name is KA- Any hints? That's a really funny story about DQ :D
6/9/2011 c8 4Blank Papyrus
This was a great chapter and almost beyond cute! XD I loved it. Please update soon
4Blank PapyrusThis was a great chapter and almost beyond cute! XD I loved it. Please update soon
6/1/2011 c5 Blank Papyrus
THIS STORY IS SO FREAKING AMAZING WHY DOESN'T IT HAVE AT LEAST A MILLION, REVIEWS?
Ahem. Sorry about that. God, I really love this and should probably be studying for my final, but that's hard to do with such an amazing story in front of me. Please update!
THIS STORY IS SO FREAKING AMAZING WHY DOESN'T IT HAVE AT LEAST A MILLION, REVIEWS?
Ahem. Sorry about that. God, I really love this and should probably be studying for my final, but that's hard to do with such an amazing story in front of me. Please update!
5/31/2011 c6 2completeandtotalrandomness
This is cute so far and a really great follow-up from your last story ^^ I love your style and voice and can't wait to see what else happens. Good Job~! ^.~
2completeandtotalrandomnessThis is cute so far and a really great follow-up from your last story ^^ I love your style and voice and can't wait to see what else happens. Good Job~! ^.~