for Hallow's Valentine9/4/2016 c4 Guest
Not alive anymore? Hahaha, havent updated this in 2 years. Please! Update!
Not alive anymore? Hahaha, havent updated this in 2 years. Please! Update!
8/27/2014 c4 ReaderWriter2000
Ahh, school...I look forward to how everyone deals with the upcoming chapters. I wonder if such a crazy environment will have an effect on their psyche, especially Valentine. Hope to see more soon!
Ahh, school...I look forward to how everyone deals with the upcoming chapters. I wonder if such a crazy environment will have an effect on their psyche, especially Valentine. Hope to see more soon!
11/18/2012 c1 
2ohsocyanide
There's something vaguely funny about the last part. I dunno, Valentine just sort of made me chuckle. :)
2ohsocyanideThere's something vaguely funny about the last part. I dunno, Valentine just sort of made me chuckle. :)
9/6/2011 c3 2bookaholic13
how can you just cut it off like that man! your just too cruel! when Ch.4 coming? write soon! AHHHHH! waiting sucks!
2bookaholic13how can you just cut it off like that man! your just too cruel! when Ch.4 coming? write soon! AHHHHH! waiting sucks!
8/5/2011 c2 La Belle Demoiselle
Awww, Valentine sounds adorable, I'm certain no ones thinks he sucks!
In any case, I love the premise of your story so far, and hope that you'll get a chance to update soon.
Awww, Valentine sounds adorable, I'm certain no ones thinks he sucks!
In any case, I love the premise of your story so far, and hope that you'll get a chance to update soon.
5/31/2011 c2 2bookaholic13
Valentine is hilarious! I think Hallow should forget Chris i mean there's like another guy who wants him RIGHT THERE!
2bookaholic13Valentine is hilarious! I think Hallow should forget Chris i mean there's like another guy who wants him RIGHT THERE!
5/31/2011 c2 Anime Cresent Moon
i dont think i have laughed so much! XD
i think i can see where this is going .. love triangle between Hallow, Valentine and the boy they will, uh, tell. something happens to Christmas or its like... a love square? hmm *strokes beard of wisdom*
really love it XD
in chapter one near the bottom theres a typo of "bad" that needs to be changed to "bed" (just to make editing a bit easier for you ^^;;;)
overall, really good, liking the dive into yaoi (or however you spell it) :)
cant wait to see what else is going to become of this :D
ACM xxx
ps: have they updated fictionpress? cos when you sign in its a bit different O.o lol oh well :)
ACM xxx
i dont think i have laughed so much! XD
i think i can see where this is going .. love triangle between Hallow, Valentine and the boy they will, uh, tell. something happens to Christmas or its like... a love square? hmm *strokes beard of wisdom*
really love it XD
in chapter one near the bottom theres a typo of "bad" that needs to be changed to "bed" (just to make editing a bit easier for you ^^;;;)
overall, really good, liking the dive into yaoi (or however you spell it) :)
cant wait to see what else is going to become of this :D
ACM xxx
ps: have they updated fictionpress? cos when you sign in its a bit different O.o lol oh well :)
ACM xxx
5/30/2011 c2 6VeeVeeLa
uh oh it looks like the chapter repeats itself. you might want to fix that but otherwise this is a great read ^^ im enjoying this story!
6VeeVeeLauh oh it looks like the chapter repeats itself. you might want to fix that but otherwise this is a great read ^^ im enjoying this story!
5/19/2011 c1 2bookaholic13
hey it dosent matter if you were half dead i liked it. :)
so "hallows" is Halloween right? I've never heard of All Hallows Eve, what is that the eve of Halloween? like Christmas Eve? huh, thats kind of smart.
2bookaholic13hey it dosent matter if you were half dead i liked it. :)
so "hallows" is Halloween right? I've never heard of All Hallows Eve, what is that the eve of Halloween? like Christmas Eve? huh, thats kind of smart.