for Like a woman scorned11/29/2011 c1 
1MandaPanda9493
I really like this, it totally feed into how I feel today and what I needed to read and feel good again.
Thank you for writing such wonderful things.
1MandaPanda9493I really like this, it totally feed into how I feel today and what I needed to read and feel good again.
Thank you for writing such wonderful things.
10/24/2011 c1 16Dragon made me do it
oops, that last review was from me, I forgot to sign in, silly me!
BTW, also like 'the hammer of epic wordsmiths'
16Dragon made me do itoops, that last review was from me, I forgot to sign in, silly me!
BTW, also like 'the hammer of epic wordsmiths'
10/24/2011 c1 Guest
He he, excellent!
I should print this out and read it to myself any time somebody pisses me off.
As I read this, I was picturing a fusion of a former boss, a doctor I saw once, basically anybody who might deserve such treatment.
I really enjoyed the exquisite details you went into, things like nitric acid, the sideways clue-by-four, batteries not included, and high fructose corn syrup. it just added so much flavour and texture to the sentiment, rather than just going for the most extreme, this element of quirky humour in a sense conveys an even greater strength of sentiment that if you went for cliches.
Maybe you should give workshops in this kind of writing for disgruntled office workers.
He he, excellent!
I should print this out and read it to myself any time somebody pisses me off.
As I read this, I was picturing a fusion of a former boss, a doctor I saw once, basically anybody who might deserve such treatment.
I really enjoyed the exquisite details you went into, things like nitric acid, the sideways clue-by-four, batteries not included, and high fructose corn syrup. it just added so much flavour and texture to the sentiment, rather than just going for the most extreme, this element of quirky humour in a sense conveys an even greater strength of sentiment that if you went for cliches.
Maybe you should give workshops in this kind of writing for disgruntled office workers.