for Screwed Up5/17/2011 c1 
7Pearl Button
I found this story funny. If you feel like writing more I'd want to know what happened to their relationship. Does she give him another chance and he realizes his mistake or does she break up with him? I can't wait to read more! I liked the characterizations!
7Pearl ButtonI found this story funny. If you feel like writing more I'd want to know what happened to their relationship. Does she give him another chance and he realizes his mistake or does she break up with him? I can't wait to read more! I liked the characterizations!
5/17/2011 c1 15MidnightFox
LOL I laughed so hard at the end. Great detail. I only noticed a few spelling mistakes. I'd like to get to know Colin's character a bit more, and I want to know if he does end up proposing or if she does end up breaking up with him, so I think you should continue.
15MidnightFoxLOL I laughed so hard at the end. Great detail. I only noticed a few spelling mistakes. I'd like to get to know Colin's character a bit more, and I want to know if he does end up proposing or if she does end up breaking up with him, so I think you should continue.
5/17/2011 c1 Saya
Continue, please!
Well written and awesome storyline. :)
Continue, please!
Well written and awesome storyline. :)