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5/28/2011 c1 29YasuRan
Good stanza structure. The placement of key words alone makes the emotions more evocative and striking ('Shaking/Hands/Pounding'). It emphasizes the jittery feeling one gets on seeing a former lover. It's a heartfelt fear but at the same time, a very contained, secret fear which I liked.

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