for Eli's Coming5/28/2011 c1 
3Rosemarysgraden001
Thats really freaky and poor Tommy having that gift. Its not bad so far!
I like the characters and the plot is nice.
~Rose~
3Rosemarysgraden001Thats really freaky and poor Tommy having that gift. Its not bad so far!
I like the characters and the plot is nice.
~Rose~
5/27/2011 c1 1Souffle Girl
Ooh, creepy. This was a nice, simple story, but it was still a good one. I really enjoyed reading it! Even though I knew that it was going to end with some horrible world-ending prophecy, I didn't guess the exact nature of it. I like that it was scientific, as opposed to some mystical/apocalyptic thing, as I was guessing.
Oh, and I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, so well done!
Good job! :)
1Souffle GirlOoh, creepy. This was a nice, simple story, but it was still a good one. I really enjoyed reading it! Even though I knew that it was going to end with some horrible world-ending prophecy, I didn't guess the exact nature of it. I like that it was scientific, as opposed to some mystical/apocalyptic thing, as I was guessing.
Oh, and I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, so well done!
Good job! :)