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5/29/2011 c1 34DanielStalwart
A very inferential description for mountains I should say. I like that for the entire story, you never mention a single thing about the word "mountain" but we readers would know that you are talking about our geographical giants. But for that last "mountain", maybe you could use other words rather than the mountain because ironcally the word "mountain" does not work well in this piece.

Well what more should I say, this is a great piece. A well written descriptive piece is always the best

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