5/29/2011 c1 34Ashlee Pond
It's so sad.
I love the emotion in this piece, you've done a good job of capturing the hurt.
I noticed a few times you changed tense, which broke up the flow and got a bit confusing at some points.
But over all it was a good read.
You said it was based on real events; I hope that you're okay.
And writer's block really sucks.
It's so sad.
I love the emotion in this piece, you've done a good job of capturing the hurt.
I noticed a few times you changed tense, which broke up the flow and got a bit confusing at some points.
But over all it was a good read.
You said it was based on real events; I hope that you're okay.
And writer's block really sucks.