Reviews: Victoria | FictionPress

9/20/2015 c2 venomx99x
I am enjoying it so far would love to see more I would like a less first person look on the dialog though but that might just be me.

4/13/2014 c2

1M0nster
Oh God I wish I could see another chapter! This is so good! You can see their character instantly, good job.

4/2/2014 c2 Dubsteven
I'd like to see more of this :D
actually I'd love to

3/5/2014 c2

1Ronni King
IF YOU DON'T FINISH THIS, SO HELP ME I WILL-*mmmmmhhpphhddjsjj*
Sorry bout that, she has anger issues.
STOP PUTTING YOUR HAND OVER MY- *mmdbvdhdjakshd*

11/16/2013 c2

1TGJJ
This is great work. I think the differences between the characters is excellent, I would love to see more of this as it is great

12/28/2012 c2 claymorebn
You should definitely finish this, it's really good :)

11/18/2011 c2 Nia Love
This is good so far,I would really like to see where this story goes!

6/11/2011 c2 Yumko Yummy
not bad...like to see what happened next.