for Whirlwind of Pleasure2/1/2012 c28 Alicia Davis
3 3 I would have loved to see them in the traditional familysetting and have things with the sister and alpha tied up but it was good.
3 3 I would have loved to see them in the traditional familysetting and have things with the sister and alpha tied up but it was good.
2/1/2012 c28 dcphoenix1
I liked it, but I think you need one more chapter or a little more clarification to really close it all up. Maybe I missed it, but I have some questions. How is Leah immortal now and how did Ermete make her immortal? Although the oracles lied and the gifts existed, were they really the oracles to give away? Why aren't the gods speaking to the oracles? They may be minor in the Gwen and Nicholas romance, but I feel it is those details that would really make the story complete.
I liked it, but I think you need one more chapter or a little more clarification to really close it all up. Maybe I missed it, but I have some questions. How is Leah immortal now and how did Ermete make her immortal? Although the oracles lied and the gifts existed, were they really the oracles to give away? Why aren't the gods speaking to the oracles? They may be minor in the Gwen and Nicholas romance, but I feel it is those details that would really make the story complete.
1/31/2012 c28 TheSweetAngel18
awwww im soso sad its over. it seems shorter than the other ones. but yay im soo glad it all worked out! loved this story soo much. just awesome
take care
awwww im soso sad its over. it seems shorter than the other ones. but yay im soo glad it all worked out! loved this story soo much. just awesome
take care
1/31/2012 c28 bookworm6193
This story is just another example of how awesome an author you are. I just wish the story was longer. :( Oh well. Great story!
This story is just another example of how awesome an author you are. I just wish the story was longer. :( Oh well. Great story!
1/31/2012 c28 Greecian
the journey was great! and quite the twist with thanatos being Anila's father... very devious! Loved the chapter, love the story, great work!
the journey was great! and quite the twist with thanatos being Anila's father... very devious! Loved the chapter, love the story, great work!
1/31/2012 c28 JubblyBUbbly
So the story is AWEsome, but there's one thing missing...a frikin' EPILOGUE : )
So the story is AWEsome, but there's one thing missing...a frikin' EPILOGUE : )
1/31/2012 c28 
8annajade
Love it, love it, love it! A good mixture of comedic, romantic, saucy and tragic. The pacing was good, but we blame FP for that. Can't wait for the next installment!
-Anna
8annajadeLove it, love it, love it! A good mixture of comedic, romantic, saucy and tragic. The pacing was good, but we blame FP for that. Can't wait for the next installment!
-Anna
1/30/2012 c28 1Midnight113
Ah, lovely ending. Truly brilliant story and concept. I enjoyed it and I'm so glad she was able to bring him back. I'm also happy her father was understanding in the end as well. Everything worked out. Thank you for writing this and I hope to see more from you, either here or elsewhere. ;) Well done!
1Midnight113Ah, lovely ending. Truly brilliant story and concept. I enjoyed it and I'm so glad she was able to bring him back. I'm also happy her father was understanding in the end as well. Everything worked out. Thank you for writing this and I hope to see more from you, either here or elsewhere. ;) Well done!
1/30/2012 c28 smrae
Congratulation on finishing the story! The ending was perfect and I loved it. So sad to see this story end, but I look forward to what you will write next. Great job :)
Congratulation on finishing the story! The ending was perfect and I loved it. So sad to see this story end, but I look forward to what you will write next. Great job :)
1/30/2012 c28 2xxcubanangelxx
It was REALLY good :D
I hope you decide to put the last one here because I have no idea what I will do with myself if I can't read it :(
2xxcubanangelxxIt was REALLY good :D
I hope you decide to put the last one here because I have no idea what I will do with myself if I can't read it :(
1/30/2012 c28 Scarlet Dreams
Great book! I hope to see more of these characters in the next one. I would not be able to decide which book of the elemental series is better because I love them all, which leads me to another matter: Please, please, please post Submerged in Ecstasy on this site! It is the only way I have to read your stories, you have been my favorite author on fictiopress since your first story. I would love to get one of your books but I´m sorry to say that in my country everybody needs permission from the goverment to buy anything in any other currency that is not our own -permission which is very hard to get- So in smaller words it is Imposible for me to get any of your books.
Please, please, please, please, please post Submerged in Ecstasy on fictionpress!
Great book! I hope to see more of these characters in the next one. I would not be able to decide which book of the elemental series is better because I love them all, which leads me to another matter: Please, please, please post Submerged in Ecstasy on this site! It is the only way I have to read your stories, you have been my favorite author on fictiopress since your first story. I would love to get one of your books but I´m sorry to say that in my country everybody needs permission from the goverment to buy anything in any other currency that is not our own -permission which is very hard to get- So in smaller words it is Imposible for me to get any of your books.
Please, please, please, please, please post Submerged in Ecstasy on fictionpress!