for The Edge of the Universe6/23/2011 c6 L'Archange
I can't figure him out. I just can't. WHAT does he want? And I'm curious (and scared) about where all these events will lead. I have a small feeling that either Amelia loses her life, or her sanity. Or...both. I guess we'll all see.
I can't figure him out. I just can't. WHAT does he want? And I'm curious (and scared) about where all these events will lead. I have a small feeling that either Amelia loses her life, or her sanity. Or...both. I guess we'll all see.
6/23/2011 c5 L'Archange
Wow this just gets darker and darker!
So here's the thing: I don't see it as being realistic that the old lady would suspect anything just by hearing yelling and by hearing someone say "Fin is dead" - very circumstantial. At the same time, Fin could have had a heart attack...but I suppose in her state, Amelia wasn't really thinking straight, was she? Amelia paranoid much? :P Mayhaps.
It's a tad unnerving to know that Felix has been watching her all that time. His motive is still a mystery...will we ever find out? It would be nice to know how he found her, why he's taken interest and what this ultimately means for Amelia.
Will he forever be limited (and ironically powerful) within the mirror realm? Will only her reflection get attention? :P
Anywho, I foretell this thing getting darker still...
Wow this just gets darker and darker!
So here's the thing: I don't see it as being realistic that the old lady would suspect anything just by hearing yelling and by hearing someone say "Fin is dead" - very circumstantial. At the same time, Fin could have had a heart attack...but I suppose in her state, Amelia wasn't really thinking straight, was she? Amelia paranoid much? :P Mayhaps.
It's a tad unnerving to know that Felix has been watching her all that time. His motive is still a mystery...will we ever find out? It would be nice to know how he found her, why he's taken interest and what this ultimately means for Amelia.
Will he forever be limited (and ironically powerful) within the mirror realm? Will only her reflection get attention? :P
Anywho, I foretell this thing getting darker still...
6/19/2011 c6 
6Carmel March
I like that this has a dark theme - it makes it really intense. I hope you update soon, because you left us hanging there! :)
~Carm~
6Carmel MarchI like that this has a dark theme - it makes it really intense. I hope you update soon, because you left us hanging there! :)
~Carm~
6/2/2011 c4 Aobh
Heya again! I'm still reading! And it's really veryvery good! I feel almost scared to look in my bedroom mirror aha felix is a wonderful character, very strong willed. Well done :)
Keep it up and it's on my alerts so I'll keep reading !
Kira x
Heya again! I'm still reading! And it's really veryvery good! I feel almost scared to look in my bedroom mirror aha felix is a wonderful character, very strong willed. Well done :)
Keep it up and it's on my alerts so I'll keep reading !
Kira x
5/31/2011 c2 Carmel March
Aw, I loved this chapter. Cute ending, too! And I love Felix! Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
Aw, I loved this chapter. Cute ending, too! And I love Felix! Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
5/30/2011 c1 Aobh
Before I write my compliment, let me just say that I am bewildered as to why this doesn't have more reviews! It is excellent, I live the voice in the mirror, and well done on creating a good mix of horror and mystery. You've got me asking questions, keep up the good work!
Kira :)
Before I write my compliment, let me just say that I am bewildered as to why this doesn't have more reviews! It is excellent, I live the voice in the mirror, and well done on creating a good mix of horror and mystery. You've got me asking questions, keep up the good work!
Kira :)
5/30/2011 c1 Carmel March
Quite an intriguing first chapter - you've definitely hooked me! Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~
Quite an intriguing first chapter - you've definitely hooked me! Can't wait for more :)
~Carm~