for starlike8/18/2013 c4 
73Bitch Du Jour
Again, you've ended this piece so brilliantly. Those last two lines are perfect.
73Bitch Du JourAgain, you've ended this piece so brilliantly. Those last two lines are perfect.
8/18/2013 c3 Bitch Du Jour
Oh gosh, for lack of better words, I really love this. Everything about it.
Oh gosh, for lack of better words, I really love this. Everything about it.
8/18/2013 c2 Bitch Du Jour
The last two lines of this are painfully easy to relate to. The ideas given in this are good analogies to the barren and speechless feelings that overtake you when you're in love. At least, that's how I felt reading. :)
The last two lines of this are painfully easy to relate to. The ideas given in this are good analogies to the barren and speechless feelings that overtake you when you're in love. At least, that's how I felt reading. :)
8/18/2013 c1 Bitch Du Jour
This is lovely. The imagery is sharp, yet subtle. The feeling I get is very drunken, but nevertheless beautiful.
This is lovely. The imagery is sharp, yet subtle. The feeling I get is very drunken, but nevertheless beautiful.
9/6/2011 c4 skersey
I love this!
I love the alliteration and the slight mysterious element to this. You really utilize romanticism well here. Excellent job
I love this!
I love the alliteration and the slight mysterious element to this. You really utilize romanticism well here. Excellent job
7/28/2011 c2 5Luridpretty
This is so beautiful, I just. I don't even know how to describe it. I especially love the first line because I'm obsessed with bones, haha. I think it should be "breath" instead of "breathe", though, but I'm not sure? Either way, amazing.
5LuridprettyThis is so beautiful, I just. I don't even know how to describe it. I especially love the first line because I'm obsessed with bones, haha. I think it should be "breath" instead of "breathe", though, but I'm not sure? Either way, amazing.