for Pursuit Of Happiness7/10/2013 c6 
2TheDarkPassenger
I am loving this story for some odd reason, despite not usually liking abusive slash. I feel really bad for Marcus but at the same time feel kinda bad for Malachi too because I think he really does love his brother in some extremely sick and twisted way. I hope he can gain some sanity and they can be a true couple. That is, if you ever update, which I really hope you do soon!
2TheDarkPassengerI am loving this story for some odd reason, despite not usually liking abusive slash. I feel really bad for Marcus but at the same time feel kinda bad for Malachi too because I think he really does love his brother in some extremely sick and twisted way. I hope he can gain some sanity and they can be a true couple. That is, if you ever update, which I really hope you do soon!
1/15/2013 c6 4Orchidfur
Omg... Don't leave me like that! Lol please update ASAP I was like...o.o the entire time
4OrchidfurOmg... Don't leave me like that! Lol please update ASAP I was like...o.o the entire time
8/24/2011 c6 Nebulad
I actually like this. Usually I avoid abuse slash because it seems so done, y'know? But I happened upon your story and decided'what the hell' and I actually like it.
I actually like this. Usually I avoid abuse slash because it seems so done, y'know? But I happened upon your story and decided'what the hell' and I actually like it.
8/16/2011 c6 8deshaunwalker
Didn't really understand the ending, but I guess it was supposed to be that way? And for some reason, I don't like Alex. It's not like I want Malichi (I think that's how you spell it) to like, rape his brother or anything (cause that's pretty shitty), but I feel like he's standing in the way of them actually having a shot together. Anddd I hope they have a shot together, even though Malichi is still being an asshat. Maybe if he lightened up on his asshattedness or something
8deshaunwalkerDidn't really understand the ending, but I guess it was supposed to be that way? And for some reason, I don't like Alex. It's not like I want Malichi (I think that's how you spell it) to like, rape his brother or anything (cause that's pretty shitty), but I feel like he's standing in the way of them actually having a shot together. Anddd I hope they have a shot together, even though Malichi is still being an asshat. Maybe if he lightened up on his asshattedness or something
8/14/2011 c6 animehog
Awww~ actually I think the twins make a really cute couple. Idk, I have this weird fetish for twincest, especially if its one-sided.
But obviously, I'd like it if they were at least consensual, I mean I feel like that Alex guy is the third wheel who just getting in between the two brothers...xD
Yes, yes, I know I have a sick mind but I sorta enjoy Malachi's character. I mean he's all possessive and scary and kewl~ *yeah I have a thing for crazy guys -sigh-*...but anyhoo, loved it!~
Do update as soon as you can! And happy belated birthday!~
Awww~ actually I think the twins make a really cute couple. Idk, I have this weird fetish for twincest, especially if its one-sided.
But obviously, I'd like it if they were at least consensual, I mean I feel like that Alex guy is the third wheel who just getting in between the two brothers...xD
Yes, yes, I know I have a sick mind but I sorta enjoy Malachi's character. I mean he's all possessive and scary and kewl~ *yeah I have a thing for crazy guys -sigh-*...but anyhoo, loved it!~
Do update as soon as you can! And happy belated birthday!~
8/14/2011 c6 Saikado Mai
Muahahaha.
You're wrong. :D
I help out in a bakery. I NEVER run out of delicious cookies. *cough*
Anyways... :D I finally had time to read this. ;A; You're writing skills are so awesome. I'm so torn. xD I don't know if I want him to actually give in or jsut sock his brother in the face.
Muahahaha.
You're wrong. :D
I help out in a bakery. I NEVER run out of delicious cookies. *cough*
Anyways... :D I finally had time to read this. ;A; You're writing skills are so awesome. I'm so torn. xD I don't know if I want him to actually give in or jsut sock his brother in the face.
8/12/2011 c5 6Mormeril Dark Lady of Insanity
I'll bet its their sister. This story is good, and I'd love to read more soon.
6Mormeril Dark Lady of InsanityI'll bet its their sister. This story is good, and I'd love to read more soon.
8/12/2011 c6 Poptart Guava King
LOL I HAS NO CLUE WHAT JUST HAPPENED EITHER. and yea. five. at that age i probably would have screamed "WRESTLING" and jumped in... O_O good times. good times.
LOL I HAS NO CLUE WHAT JUST HAPPENED EITHER. and yea. five. at that age i probably would have screamed "WRESTLING" and jumped in... O_O good times. good times.
8/12/2011 c6 7Luckythewolfdog
Ffff As always awesome chapter =v= and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! lol were both born in August and were LEOS~ and you can call meh boo as long as i get to call you booboo~ and I'm taking that the gay way cuz meh is hurhur -v-
7LuckythewolfdogFfff As always awesome chapter =v= and HAPPY BIRTHDAY! lol were both born in August and were LEOS~ and you can call meh boo as long as i get to call you booboo~ and I'm taking that the gay way cuz meh is hurhur -v-
8/4/2011 c5 Luckythewolfdog
fff awesome just awesome and why do they always run for the door XD. They always remember from the movies that once your corner only way to get free is kicking some ass, kick him in the balls! Then run to the door!
lol I think I'm happy ranting xD
hehe great chapter
fff awesome just awesome and why do they always run for the door XD. They always remember from the movies that once your corner only way to get free is kicking some ass, kick him in the balls! Then run to the door!
lol I think I'm happy ranting xD
hehe great chapter
8/3/2011 c5 8deshaunwalker
Hah. If his little sister catching him doesn't halt him in his ways, then nothing will. The chapter was REALLY short, btw, but I loved it :)
8deshaunwalkerHah. If his little sister catching him doesn't halt him in his ways, then nothing will. The chapter was REALLY short, btw, but I loved it :)
7/9/2011 c4 7Luckythewolfdog
hehehe aw thank you for making me feel special 3, you're welcome for the phrases ^v^ and thats the second time thats happen to me xD
7Luckythewolfdoghehehe aw thank you for making me feel special 3, you're welcome for the phrases ^v^ and thats the second time thats happen to me xD